T.T

I have to say that this was a great story, still not enough to make me like or feel sorry for Zelos, but good.

What can I say? You still write as perfect as ever. ^^ I love the angst between Zelos and Sheena as well as Zelos and everyone else. You sure write some dark stuff. ^_~ The only complain I would have is indenting certain paragraphs when changing speakers. Also, I think there was one obvious typo where you wrote "vein" instead of "vain" but that's beside the point. Keep writing! You have a real talent for it! ^_^

Poor Zelos. But a good story, by all means. I liked the angst. (For some reason, I enjoy angst...) I think Zelos deserves a lot more than what he's usually given. Even if he seems stupid, he's obviously not always like that.

Execellent fanfic. i don't think that any other person on fan fiction could have put it better. realistic, heartstring-tugger, and gives you a perfect idea of what Zelos was thinking. 10/10!

God dammit... it's too sad! I wish there were more fics like this!! >.

...TT_TT

Enough said. Loved it.

GSS: *Cries like yaio fan girl* NO ZELOS CAN'T DIE NOW HOW IS HE SUPOSE TO BE GAY WITH LLOYD

Sheaira: Never mind here she always does that when one of her fav characters dies off She actual pro Sheelos hehehe it sound funny

GSS: *Hugs Zelos* I LOVE YOU JUST LIKE EVERY OTHER GIRL IN MELTOKIO

Sheaira: O_O; eh...kay *Sweatdrop*

-GSS
*Waves to Loyal fan who throw tomatetoes* GSS: NEXT TIME THROW PEARS!
Fans: YOU SUCK!

That was really, really good. I remember not long ago wanting to write this song for that momment of the game, but I couldn't get it into words(I'm a bad writer anyways)... But this was perfect, and much more than I thought it would be. You make Zelos sound more bitter than I immagined him, but I'd say your characterization is top notch. Seriously, your work is excellent. Do continue writting, I'll go check anything you may have written, or are to write.
Congratulations on this excellent piece,
Roaming Shadow.

It's so sad...but good. I kinda thought Zelos would end up like that, although I never knew the ending with Kratos by your side. I kept Zelos once, but I never knew he would die. For some reason, thsi song works with it. A friend of mine said that "Be Strong" by Delta Goodrem works for this Tales of Symphonia cast- particularly for Kratos. I dunno, but if that mattered. Anyone, keep up the great work. I imagine this is a one shot. I didn't read the summary...

OMG!That was so sad.(wipe tears) Zelos I love you so fricken much!

I love this fic! I can actually relate with Zelos, being forced into a life he had no choice in...

RIP, Zelos Wilder

Oh my gosh!... Your fic is so beautiful!
I love it! I'm a Super Zelos' fan and this fic make me cry.
Uh... I'm mexican so I cant's write very well english.
But the point is... Your fic is awesome!

nice! poor poor Zelos. XD well Great story

Very well written, absolutely wonderful. The only real mistake I can find is the dialouge; there was more than one person talking in a few paragraphs. Nothing that can't be fixed in a few minutes.

I'd also like to note that polycarbonate is a special form of plastic. That's the first time I've seen someone compare water to plastic. XD

This is definitely going in my favorites.

Ocean Rose