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Slayerette wannabe
2009-11-07 . chapter 3
These stories are hilarious! Targ Souffle reminds me of a cooking disastor I had while making mac'n'cheese. Any way they were funny, definatly worth reading more than once.
TrekkieBaby
2009-08-03 . chapter 3
I liked it! It made me laugh...
monstermunch3435
2009-06-18 . chapter 3
Aw! bless. how sweet. there aren't enough short stories like this one! you should definately write some more! update soon
JTSplash
2008-01-25 . chapter 3
LOL. Loved it:D I know Keira and Dax:P they were funny. Hope you write another one
CrashCart9
2007-04-22 . chapter 3
Very cute. I love those two.
Julie-N-Maggie-fan
2006-06-21 . chapter 3
HA! That was superb! I love the Kira/Dax friendship. I couldn't stop laughing. Good job!!
jadz
2006-01-26 . chapter 1
Just came across your story...it was great! Fills in the whole missing "Camelot" scene very nicely. How about more?
Packwolf
2005-11-15 . chapter 3
I couldn't stop laughing! All your stories have been humorous and in character. I like how you tied in the dialougue from the episode so well with the whole Lancelot thing. The targ souffle was absolutely classic. I feel sorry for the goldfish though, I hope Torias fares better. Anyway, keep writing!
Frost Deejn
2005-06-22 . chapter 2
The targ souffle reminds me of too many times I've tried to cook. Thanks for a highly enjoyable read.
csi-ds9
2005-06-22 . chapter 3
haha, that's really funny!
JacobedRose
2005-06-22 . chapter 3
Goldfish! Poor Kira! This is very good keep up the good work. Will there be a Lela or a Curzon joining the group?
JacobedRose
2005-06-22 . chapter 2
Targ souffle? Poor Worf! Poor Benjamin's kitchen, but it sounded like fun!
MistiWhitesun
2005-06-21 . chapter 2
/rubs eyes/

Uh, okay.

I am in Peru, right now, sick, and have been sleeping all day, and am using a Spanish keyboard.

Please excuse me for being short on words.

Keep writing!
Misti Wolan
2005-06-06 . chapter 1
Hi. :)

[grins] That is funny.

I noticed one problem: "dawning one before leaving her quarters"—"dawning" should be "donning"

Keep writing!
me
2005-05-29 . chapter 1
I liked it. I really liked it. You really characterized Kira very very well.
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