Well that was incredibliy jumpy. You might just want to consider pulling the flashbacks together and making thos the opening chapters - It would certainly cut down on the confusion factor (like I'm one to be taliking about confusing fics - heh) but with often sudden and rapid bouncing between the present and the past - I really did feel a little lost.

So lets hope you find the time to finish this - I'm interested in seeing how this all ends up.

achitka

it should be a Very Happy but Sad ending
update soon

Ahh!
Lol, I got your message thingy. I'm not sure if this is the story you were talking about, but I'm really sorry for not reviewing! I could have sworn I did! :S
Oh well. I reviewed now, and I hope it works this time.
I could have sworn I reviewed...
But anyways, update soon, and again, sorry!

Update Soon!!

I want a happy ending! Not sad! I get so sad around sad endings! I guess that's the point, but...so what?! I love happy endings most of the time! I liked this chapter by the way, very descriptive. *I am happy* P.S. I'm really sorry about you getting dumped. I tell you what, if you asked me to the dance, *even though I don't know you* I would go with you. ^.^

pretty guud chapter Lolas not lookin 2 guud tho...n e wayz sorry bout this beigng short but im in skool XP lmao n e wayz uh about the ending...a happy ending? lmao sounds great to me lol keep up the guud work

Poor Lola... :(

Wow, can't wait to see what it is...need treat now...lol. It's good though. ^.^

ACK! I AM SO SORRY!
(if ur wonderin wat about its bout mwe not reviewing!) again om so sorry lyfe is so stressful! I havent even updated my story in 2months! boo...lol highschool is so flippin hard specially since its my third year so its only gunna get harder wen my final year ( next year) comes up :'( lmao im supposed 2 b doing my 50 word essay but my mind went blank and i decided to check up on things and look u updated 2 chapters already :'( erg im so frustrated! Its already last period and i'm not even half done my essay :'(TT_TT
can i cry PLEAZE CAN I CRY!...ok im done...lif u didnt notice im stressing...and this review which is meant to give u feedback on ur story has nothing to do with ur story so far...dont no how that works...n e way great 2 chapters i'm lookin foreward to that 'treat' o n if u updated...say in the next 2 weeks u wont b getting a review from me cuz im grounded from my comp...( im on the skool comps ryte now) so ye...that goes for ppl who r erading my stories also ...ew its so quiet in here im the only one. so i gotta go scary library person it walking around and shooting me dirty looks...dont noe wat i ever did to her...cept scream at her a few times...show her attitude but othet than that im a guud person!...ok now im ramblling again...joi n e way hope u got a laff out of this cuz non of its tru...yee ryte i wish it wasnt tru. Hope u had fun getting confused by me :D

Please update soon.

Oo Link shouldn't of ignored that...

I can see why it took months! It's wonderful! I can't think of an review that could match up to it. So uh I want to see that next chapter!

Sincerely,

Queen Yarbo

(GASP!) I never reviewed you?! Holy Cheese! I can't believe I never reviewed this!! It's just so...yeah...awesome. It's something that I can sit here with my eyes glued to the screen, and my huge cup of caffiene and just read...It is super cool and wicked awesome...also freekin sweet. I'm really hyper today, so I'm reviewing you in my hyper state. I like the relationship stuff blooming and "hyperventilating" shall we say? I love the description. I feel like I'm right there the whole time. It is super cool, and personally, I go with the fairy tale endings. I like sad ending as much as the next person, but I don't know...I would go with either. Fairy tale just sounds good on this story...^.^

Hello!
I cannot believe I'm saying this to you, of ALL people, but... I like. You must update.

Oh my...well I suppose the world is a very interesting place filled with strange and unusal things - see ya achitka

YAAYAAYAAYAAYAAYAAYAAYAAYAAY!!

That's all I have to say. It rocked. Spechless. :o

Well...ending...make it bitter-sweet! YAY!

More PLEASE!

(Mysteriously...)

(Sorry...my reviews are short lately...>.>)