Oh,poor,poor Brock.Making the sacrifice for the world,a true hero.Also,Woul`dnt the eggs contain draTINIs not they`re evolved form draGONITE?Good story overall

I'll keep Jigglypuff safe! Great story!

Delia:“Sweetie, your sweaty from your trip. Let me bathe you like I did when you were little.”

That's just sick and wrong. Other than that, another great chapter, this story is addictive!

You insulted Jigglypuff! RAR! Other than that, great story, very funny! Love the part about Ash being the "INFAMOUS PALLET TOWN BIKE SMASHER!"

ash the playboy

It's as Good as Pokemon Harem fics get.
What's next Ash Ketchum, Pokeworld Giggolo.
I'm not sarcastic, I give this fic a 7 out of 10.

Very funny!IT IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES NOW!

This was great! ~EG