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| liam 2008-10-04 ch 63, anon. | abusethis story is really involving and im loving it. Can't wait to find out why sable had to leave early and i hope there are more rescues planned for the future. keep up the good work and please submit another chapter soon! |
| foxee-chik 2008-09-17 ch 63,  | abuseoh! keep goin! i like it! |
| Aswen 2008-09-11 ch 63, | abuseThis is seriously exiting! Update soon please! |
| lissysue85 2008-09-11 ch 63, | abuseWow what a story so far. It has taken me a good few days to read but it was well worth it. I'm so glad Alan survived his attack and I hope Sugi gets what he deserves. I love the way you have portrayed the relationship with Jeff and Alan. Please update soon. I can't wait to find out what happens next. |
| cathrl 2008-09-10 ch 63, | abuseStill much enjoying this. There's definitely something nefarious going on on the SBX. Nice to see Tin-Tin involved too - and I particularly liked your rationalisation of why Tim Casey isn't told about IR. Just one quibble - I'm pretty sure Top Gun is Navy, and Scott's Air Force. |
| Iniysa 2008-09-09 ch 63, | abuseWahoo, an update! Great as always! Looking forward to more! :) Lauren |
| Eternal Density 2008-09-09 ch 63, | abusegood chapter. Sable sounds like an even more enigmatic character than expected :D cool |
| criminally charmed 2008-09-07 ch 63, | abusePoor Scott. I thought he might get lucky tonight. And what was up with Alan's call? Curious. That whole mess with the holes is VERY fishy...Something is very hinky there. |
| Digi-Girl101 2008-09-07 ch 63, | abuseOMG!! LOVE IT! UPDATE ASAP!! Oh my! What'd Alan say to Scotty? lol! |
| Math Girl 2008-09-07 ch 63, | abuseWell done with the exciting rescue scenes, Tikatu =) It's cool to see Jeff up and flying TB1, himself. TinTin was involved, too, which is always fun to see. Is Sable an agent of some sort? Perhaps a bit older and more stable than she pretends to be? Can't wait to find out! Christine |
| Little Miss Bump 2008-09-07 ch 63, | abuseGood chapter, my friend. Typical younger brother, imagine ruining Scott's date?! Tsk! I'm glad that Alan seems happier after his unpleasant experience in the last chapter. I guess hanging out with his big bro hepled to calm things down (which only made it a littl meaner when he rang Scott's cell in the middle of his date!) Ooh, you have me intrigued as to what sort of a person Sable really is. Why does 'duty call' when she's a cheff? So many questions that need answering! Well done on another successful update, buddy. Please post the next chapter soon, hmm? I'll be waiting! |
| SusanMartha 2008-09-07 ch 63, | abuseOk, what did Alan ask Scott? And what is Sable really doing? I wonder if someone added sme extra security at Wartons and Sable is it. |
| foxee-chik 2008-07-17 ch 62, | abusekeep goin! i like it! |
| Aswen 2008-07-12 ch 62, | abuseHmm... Interesting! Update soon please! |
| Math Girl 2008-07-11 ch 62, | abuseWow. Very tense and fast moving. I entirely felt for Alan, whose reactions were quite realistic. Personally, I hope that Lee Sugimoto goes down, hard. Good job, Tikatu! C. |