Хорошая исторйя. Хотъ н много ошыбок.

hola, rapidito, Seferino Rengel de venezuela "habla" ruso, visita su web ngefics.tk, srengel arr oba hotmail. com y arr oba gmail. com, seguro q estara feliz de practicar contigo, no preguntes como llegue a tu fic.
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Hi! Ich find your stroy realy interesting. Although i´m from russia so i kann find a lot of mistakes but i find it cool that Joey refuses Anzu ^_^ He will besser passes to Seto. Jeh, Shonen-Ai 4ever *evil grin* so the story is interesting and i think i shoud read another one from you. Then you know, i´m learning español and if you would like i could helf you to improve your russian and you kann give my few tips in my bad spanish ^.~

Очень хороший сюжет, но жаль что так много ошибок( Создалось впечатление, будто фик писали при помощи он-лайн переводчика. Ох, если б не эти ошибки...(

Every day you surprise to me, now but in Russian, nonwise that you spoke that language, Ahi te vez!!

I would write the review in English. As russian I can see a lot of mistakes, but it is rather good!