It has been a while since you've updated and I'm not sure what one extra review might do to persuade you, however, I do hope that you'll someday wish to continue this story.

As I was reading it, I simply couldn't tear my eyes away from the screen. There is a very distinct simplicity to your writing style that is absolutely addicting. It is so honest and sincere and you never wasted time alluding around emotions or details. This story is very matter-of-fact and precise. I have, thus far, loved every moment I have spent reading it.

I'm not really a fan of the Kazyua/Jun pairing, aside from having a rather distinctive respect for the love that produced Jin and (as I would like to think, at least) Asuka Kazama. This story has changed my mind; it is the first of its kind that I have read. Jun and Kazyua are in love in this story and the reasons for their dedication and devotion to one another are rather clearly defined. It is believable and honest and extremely heartfelt.

I don't have words to describe how powerful the emotions running through your words are. I find that you've done a completely masterful job with this piece of fiction and I'm hoping, more than anything, that you'll find this story incomplete. Best regards for your future stories, though I would be lying if I told you that I wouldn't be waiting for this one.

What's happening?!? What's going to happen?! Oh, my! OH, MY! UPDATE SOON!

hah! so cute!! more, more!

Omfg!
this story is so@#$% Good. yuo must be an excellent writer. well i'm gonna aspire to write just like you.
could you tell me what you thikn of my story

i love it! this is a great story! i've actually been searching for one between jun and kazuya because they're my favorites...i found a few, but not as awesome and totally breath taking as this one

This story is incredible! It's a good story please update it because I am so looking foward into reading more of this.

please keep writing..

please please > <

UPDATE !!

I've always been quite a fan of your work. ^_^ This is a wonderful story! Please continue!

I love your story please update on it

wicked you used some of this in mishima connections 3 did'nt you well its really cool

Do I really need to say how awesome your story was? How do you do it I ask myself everytime I write my own stories! UPDATE whenever you can!

dude.. this story rocks, man!! i love it!

Oh my god. I'm so glad I found your account so I can tell you what I think about your stories. I love this one. It's so awesome, and even though I don't think that Asuka is Jun and Kazuya's daughter, I love the way you've written it. Your ideas do make sense, and you're slowly bringing me around on the Asuka thing. Kudos to you. I can't wait for you to update...

hi! Keep up the good work! Update soon!

Oh! I like it! please update soon! ^_^ I have a question, could that baby possibly be Asuka?? Update soon!

~Sailor Otaku