Very nicely done story. You really captured the essence of Doc, and of Saunders. Good plot. Good action. Touching.

This is an incredibly powerful story. You portrayed the role of the medic in an action-filled episode and left me deeply immersed in a metaphical world.

Your depiction of each of the squad is right on, whether in depth (as Doc) or in support (as Sarge or Kirby and Littlejohn and Billy). You even have peripheral characters (the German and Capt. Parish) reflect the value of Doc.

Thank you for sharing stories which I will revisit and enjoy again and again.

Well written. Very intense! Great job with the POV. Was like watching it instead of just reading it. I look forward to more from you.