 Wile E. Coyote 2005-07-02 . chapter 5 Interesting poems there partner. I like the Anvil poem best, and the second Sparx poem is greatly written. |
 Scarabbug 2005-06-21 . chapter 4Um... I'm not sure if this is an appropriate place but... here's a title suggestion, what about "Datastream Rendezvous"? |
 Scarab Dynasty (ah you get it by now...) 2005-05-24 . chapter 4 I remember this one! It was a couple of days ago you wrote it and I liked it then. Still like it not.
Just a kid is also cool. Sparx is perhaps my fave of yours so far. |
 hyperpsychomaniac 2005-05-23 . chapter 5O. These are good. You write good poems. I like... them all. 'Specially the Random one, though that's kindof obvious. Mark one was really good too. They're all good! |
 Blue-Inked Frost 2005-05-23 . chapter 5I like it. Not sure I'm too fond of the conclusion--you build up this nicely angsty poem and then you have to insert bodily noises--but the structure's nice, it's IC for Mark, and it even rhymes. Very good. :) It might have been better to end it on an optimistic note rather than an attempt at twelve-year-old humour, though. |
 hyperpsychomaniac 2005-05-23 . chapter 1You already know I like this poem, but I'll tell you again. I like this poem. Exspecially the last part. Standing of the razors edge. Sounds cool. |
 Scarab Dynasty (blasted inability to log in from home computer *gnashes teeth*) 2005-05-21 . chapter 3 Aww, poor review button *hugs*
Yay you posted the poetry! And what good poetry it is to. Of all your poetry I think "Reach" is my favourite, though Anvil is perhaps the most appropriate.
I think you're now the offical poetry writer of this section. Please keep it up. Every character deserves a poem in fanfic. :) |