SORRY IF THIS SEEMS KIND OF FLAMEY BUT THIS IS JUST ME VENTING MY ANGER DIRECTED AT KIM BECAUSE RON'S TO SWEET TO SAY ANYTHING! AGAIN SORRY IF THIS SEEMS LIKE A FLAME THIS JUST MEANS I'M PASSIONaTe ABOUT YOUR STORY AND AM VERY ENTHRALLED BY IT (KEEP SPACING OUT AT SCHOOL AND THINKIN BOUT IT)

I swear Kim was so hurt"cough,attention **,cough" when Josh pulled the plug out on her when she was trying to call him and when he wouldn't listen to her and when he acted so "cruelly"(i say it like that because nothing he did to Kim was even a lil bit bad compared to what she did to Ron! although i get ur trying to establish that kims "hurt(idiot brought it amongst herself not listening to Ron and hurting him so much after al he's done for her)" but for real i just think Kim wants to be the victim, the center of attention just because she had a lil drama , I swear she's mad at ron for saving her **? was she retarded!?!?! idiot was so caught up making fabrications about poor sweet innocent Ron tha she can't even see whats righ infront of her she just wants to believe she's right with all her "O i wish Josh would just let me explain" or "I wish josh would believe in me just once" what an idiot! I swear if she wasn' so stuborn then mabey Ron and Her would be together instead of him being upstair with Tara! seriously i don't pity Kim at all (the nerve of that witch) but am very sad that my poor Ronny Bear has to deal with that

Hoo boy...
When you think ‘emotional drama and angst’, you REALLY deliver, don’t you?
I mean, the whole CONCEPT of this story was even bigger than last time! Not ONLY do we have Ron and Kim having to work on rebuilding their original friendship- which would have been complicated ENOUGH, after what Kim thought she heard at the end of the last story- but we’ve also got Ron going into a coma, Kim discovering that he’s bulimic because he was trying to keep in shape for her while still eating, AND Ron apparently getting Kim pregnant during a Mystical-Monkey-Power-induced ‘heat’?
(Admittedly, I’m slightly confused about that- why would the power want its warriors to mate with a girl only for them to not remember it the next day?- but it adds a very interesting extra dynamic to the plot, so I’ll let it go.)
On the topic of the MMP, the bit with Ron having extra lives- so long as he dies in battle rather than of natural causes; at least that means Kim wasn’t wasting her time worrying about the coma, since the malaria probably wouldn’t count as a battle wound even if he got it while fighting- made an interesting touch; just so long as you don’t overuse it by having Ron get into impossible-to-escape situations on a regular basis in the next story, I think it could work out fine (After all, part of Ron’s appeal as a character- in my opinion- has always been that he’s an ‘everyman’, rather than Kim’s “Anything’s Possible” attitude; give him too much power and you take away what makes him popular).
However, my all-time favourite part of this story was unquestionably the moment when Kim travelled into Ron’s MIND to try and get him out of the coma. I’ve always enjoyed anything that allows for multiple aspects of a person to interact, whether they’re clones, from alternate universes, or younger/older versions of themselves, so having Kim talk to multiple different aspects of Ron’s mind and see their opinions of her made a particularly interesting touch (Plus, of course, it reminded me of a storyline in one of my favourite Doctor Who books; while I acknowledge that the similarity is only coincidence, the little things can still attract my interest).
And as for the final part before Ron finally regained consciousness... where Ron and Kim both have to admit that they were wrong about the other and that they’re still the same person they always were...
Powerful stuff, to say the least.
Oh, and good to see the resolution of the Josh Mankey situation fairly promptly. I mean, I could kind of get where he was coming from about Kim, on some level, trying to order him around, but he still should have been willing to at least make a BIT more effort to spend time with HER rather than just bringing her along when talking to his friends.
It was as Ron said in the first part of this series; once you get past the essential basics, they really didn't have that much in common.
(Just one minor detail I didn’t get; after he tried to kill several students on at least two occasions, de-mutated or not, why the hell would ANYBODY allow Gil back into school?)
In any case, keep up the good work; I am DEFINITELY looking forward to seeing how things go from here!
(Although I really have to wonder how Kim’s going to deal with the pregnancy issue she has at the moment, I just hope she isn’t going to have a miscarriage; it might take the decision out of her hands, but I’ve always hated it when kids die before they can even really experience life)

Finally! I'm done with part II. Sigh...Your stories, and chapter are SO long, but SO good, LOL. I truly enjoy reading this story.
I'm still worry about Ron and KP future, and I still can't believe Kim is pregnant. It sucks that neither of them enjoy. I bet Ron will lament the pleasure of making the baby. I still can't fathon how Kim got pregnant. Well, it seems that Ron finally forgave KP. I'm happy for them both, and I hope that Ron will led Kim help him with his illness, and vise versa for Kim...I can't wait to read the next volume...the last (sadly) volume.

Danny

Whoa...condemned huh...pretty strong words there. First of all, Kim's reaction towards Ron when he die (which I still can't believe he is still alive) was so...wrong! It felt like Kim really DID want him to die. That was totally wrong. And now that we know that KP is "P" and thinks her life is ruin...well, I don't know what to think of that. I'm probably as shock as anyone who read this chapter.

Danny

yeah...this can't be right. How or when...Or is this a big misunderstanding? Kim couldn't be...could she?

Danny

So he does have some issues to solve...I hope Kim can help him. It's not going to be easy though...

Does Ron really has illness? Or is Kim jumping to conclusions again? Sigh...and what about Ron's enhancement of MMP? Will this be a good thing or a bad one? I can't believe how long your story is! It's shocking but so very well welcome at the same time.

Danny

Whoa...everything seems that is going right for once. The present that Ron gave Kim for Christmas was sweet, I'll give you that. One thing that scare me the most is that everything seems to be perfect for once, after going through all that and back again, and yet...this story is far from over. Something tells me that this story is like a rollercoaster. It has its up and downs, and now we are problably close to be up again which means that there might be a few downs. That's what really scare me. Sigh, until next time.

Danny

Finally! She can feel all the pain she has cause him...

Danny

I can't believe Ron's parents are so...so...it can't be! That sucks...definitely wrong!

Danny

No...I didn't like this chapter...not at all. First thing, Kim should be feeling extremely guilty. IT'S HER F*ING FAULT! There was no "he didn't know how to act" thing. All the things that he did for her was to protect her. And now at the end of the chapter she is acting a little happy with herself because of 'one touch,' that's B.S. It's her fault, she should be feeling still guilty, not a little happy. I'm so extremely mad at her. It makes me so mad that she is actually a little happy at the end. Sigh...

Danny

Truly another emotional chapter. I just love the way you write. Poor Ron...I hope Kim feel the pain, the emotional pain of what SHE truly did to Ron...

Danny

THAT'S RIGHT **! (I'm sorry Kim, but you do deserve that...) Kim's actions are too frustrating. I can't believe of how unsensitive she's been acting. Total ** queen. Bonnie and the rest are also bastards. I can't believe they are so evil. Bastards! The will burn in hell...

Danny

You don't know how much it pains me to say this (It really does!) but Kim has become a F*ing **! I can't believe she could be such a horrible, horrible person. It's not fair for Ron...Not fair at all. It actaully makes me happy to see Kim feel jealous seeing Ron and Tara together. I hope things turns out okay...I'm still a K/R fan, this story is making me see Kim in another POV and little by little is making me regret to be a K/R fan. Whoa! Your a very good writer. Anyways, I'll try to catch up with the rest ASAP...

Danny

goo0d you finally did it yippie yahoo good on ya mate and all that things are finally looking up in my dull life