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Reviews For: A Letter to My Sora

Danii and Riku
2006-04-14
ch 1,
abuse...I'm speechless. It was soo...wow. It was amazing. It's soo cute, yet, sad, at the same time.
tenshisuki
2005-08-16
ch 1,
abuseOh, this story was so sweet. I thought the love love letter was very heartwarming and very...well...sweet. I know it's better than any love letter I could ever write. :P
Anyway I was wondering if you were going to continue this? I would really like to find out if Sora ever finds the letter and reads it. (I kind of think that would be cute!)
But none the less you did a wonderful job on this and I can't wait to read more stories like this one from you.
wolf herana
2005-07-16
ch 1, anon.
abusethat was good but u sould make a part two..thank u for the story good bye
ht
2005-07-10
ch 1, anon.
abusesweet SEQUAL ! hsve sora respond and say "i love you too riku"
PSYCH0tic
2005-06-04
ch 1, anon.
abuseAw. That letter = cuteness XDD. You should continue this >_>;;
Katca Mcadar
2005-05-29
ch 1,
abuseOh Sarah that was just so beautiful, its really lovely and inspiring. I'm still so happy for you *sends mental hug* I liked the battle of wills Riku has with himself, also the lines 'intriguing' & 'Advanced Alegebra 2nd Edition'. Its a beautiful love letter with great humour for the backstory. I don't know what Final Fantasy VII song you used though. Loved the bit where he fell on Sora, crotch is spelt like that I think. The whole of Riku's emotions, I think I can still relate to that. Well done Sora, this is a great thoughtful piece. X (I think you should continue this story.)
BlackDragon1126
2005-05-29
ch 1,
abuser there going to be more chapters to this? but i love it anyways! the love letter is fantasic!
adestiny
2005-05-25
ch 1,
abuseOh, how sweet!
Riku: *chases Sora down beach* I have a letter for you!
Sora: *Runs hoplessly* SAVE ME!
@_@;; ignore them. Great story!
Xeora
2005-05-23
ch 1,
abuseYou should continue this, y'know. :D I'm actually curious at what Sora might think if he ever got his hands on that letter... O.o
AnimeDutchess
2005-05-22
ch 1,
abuseHOW KAWAII! I LUV IT SO MUCH! YOU DID AN AWESOME JOB!
Chigiri
2005-05-21
ch 1,
abuseEverything was overall well done! You wrote this from personal experience you say? Ah, I can kinda relate, but that was so long ago...^_^;

The love letter itself was indeed a bit choppy, but standing from Sora's POV (well, if Sora were to ever get ahold of the letter), I'm sure the emotion would stand out as clear as ever. I could, at least, along with Riku's pain and fear. As long as it's written by the heart, right?

Besides, if Riku never wrote a love letter before, it would make sense that the letter wouldn't be perfect. So even if it was choppy, it made it realistic in a sense(again, my opinion, and I tend to be crazy ^_^).

If you're going to, continue please! I'll be rooting you on through the way!
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