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| Danii and Riku 2006-04-14 ch 1, | abuse...I'm speechless. It was soo...wow. It was amazing. It's soo cute, yet, sad, at the same time. |
| tenshisuki 2005-08-16 ch 1, | abuseOh, this story was so sweet. I thought the love love letter was very heartwarming and very...well...sweet. I know it's better than any love letter I could ever write. :P Anyway I was wondering if you were going to continue this? I would really like to find out if Sora ever finds the letter and reads it. (I kind of think that would be cute!) But none the less you did a wonderful job on this and I can't wait to read more stories like this one from you. |
| wolf herana 2005-07-16 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was good but u sould make a part two..thank u for the story good bye |
| ht 2005-07-10 ch 1, anon. | abusesweet SEQUAL ! hsve sora respond and say "i love you too riku" |
| PSYCH0tic 2005-06-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseAw. That letter = cuteness XDD. You should continue this >_>;; |
| Katca Mcadar 2005-05-29 ch 1, | abuseOh Sarah that was just so beautiful, its really lovely and inspiring. I'm still so happy for you *sends mental hug* I liked the battle of wills Riku has with himself, also the lines 'intriguing' & 'Advanced Alegebra 2nd Edition'. Its a beautiful love letter with great humour for the backstory. I don't know what Final Fantasy VII song you used though. Loved the bit where he fell on Sora, crotch is spelt like that I think. The whole of Riku's emotions, I think I can still relate to that. Well done Sora, this is a great thoughtful piece. X (I think you should continue this story.) |
| BlackDragon1126 2005-05-29 ch 1, | abuser there going to be more chapters to this? but i love it anyways! the love letter is fantasic! |
| adestiny 2005-05-25 ch 1, | abuseOh, how sweet! Riku: *chases Sora down beach* I have a letter for you! Sora: *Runs hoplessly* SAVE ME! @_@;; ignore them. Great story! |
| Xeora 2005-05-23 ch 1, | abuseYou should continue this, y'know. :D I'm actually curious at what Sora might think if he ever got his hands on that letter... O.o |
| AnimeDutchess 2005-05-22 ch 1, | abuseHOW KAWAII! I LUV IT SO MUCH! YOU DID AN AWESOME JOB! |
| Chigiri 2005-05-21 ch 1, | abuseEverything was overall well done! You wrote this from personal experience you say? Ah, I can kinda relate, but that was so long ago...^_^; The love letter itself was indeed a bit choppy, but standing from Sora's POV (well, if Sora were to ever get ahold of the letter), I'm sure the emotion would stand out as clear as ever. I could, at least, along with Riku's pain and fear. As long as it's written by the heart, right? Besides, if Riku never wrote a love letter before, it would make sense that the letter wouldn't be perfect. So even if it was choppy, it made it realistic in a sense(again, my opinion, and I tend to be crazy ^_^). If you're going to, continue please! I'll be rooting you on through the way! |