nice but the rating should go up i am beging you to write more plz update soon

in the name of all that is holy, PLEASE FINISH! your writing is absolutely brilliant!

awsome fan fic i noticed one thing though in chapter six you put "“I’ll kill him.” Tristan’s grip on my shoulders was getting tighter." dont you mean dukes? and for yugi you put yuugi, keep it up i cant wait to read the next one!

So hilarious...My mom almost kicked me off the laptop b/c I was laughing so hard.

Please update?

This story is intersting but I am a little confused. It reminds me alittle of the Absolute boyfriend series where Riko has all these guys around her. Maybe I was missing something. Duke seems to be nice to her, why is she still feeling unhappy? And Kaiba, being the mysterious man with little words in this story, he seems he has pretty high standards and dignity, would he choose a girl who has already been with all these man? I guess I am looking forward to see how these lose ends are tied up in your story. Can't wait to read what happens next.

Love it
Update very soon!
Bye

Funny..who would've thought S. Kaiba's bro'd be a punk?

This is pretty good! Please update soon!

ok, well... I've been reading this and haven't reviewed untill now (I know I should have reviewed earlier... but I didn't)... I think it's really funny and really fun to read, hope you continue writing

Please update? Please?>,

Haha.. love it!! And I love Mokuba! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Good story! Will read more later

wow. I'm officially impressed. not only is kaiba a threat but he's (as of yet) a very quiet, almost unseen threat. he isn't prominent yet which i find interesting. i also like mokuba's characterization. it's funny as hell and kind of easy to picture shy yet outgoing friendly mokuba going all punky as he gets older. I also like how duke and tristan are characterized as not complete losses, and serenity is, well more real all around instead of sugar and spice and everything nice. I also like how this is SLOWLY BUT SURELY coming together instead of being choppy and quick.

great job!

hey i understand you wouldnt of said it was silentshipping if it wasnt serenityseto you gave to explain things anyways i like this fic so far please update soon

I didn't want to read this story. I'd seen it everywhere and yet still promised myself that I wouldn't touch it. Nope. Nuh-uh. Wouldn't go anywhere near it.

...Damnit.

It's actually good. No, wonderful. There is more silentshipping needed in this silentshipping fic, but since you clarified that it's coming in due time, I'll let that one slide. And for once a fic where I don't want to gouge out Duke's eyeballs. And where my want to gouge out Tristan's is lessened dramatically. Yay for you. Of course, that just means that you're going to have to try that much harder to pull off a convincing SxS pairing. After that bathroom scene, though, I have no doubts that you'll manage to do that seamlessly. Blast people like you with talent. I think I'm going to have to call my lawyer, just because my pencil sharpener is violating that restraining order I filed. *dials into banana*

Oh, hell. Update soon before I try talking into the fruit.