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Reviews For: Captain's Orders

Himig
2008-07-15
ch 1,
abuseFIRE THE DINGHY
SageQuill
2008-06-28
ch 1,
abuseOMG this was the funniest story I've read so far. ::Thumbs up:: Fantastic work. I could just see this happening. :) Anyway, nice work. Lol. ::Pictures the crew trying to fire a dinghy and poopdeck::
Writer
2007-09-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseLol. This is the most hilarious story I have ever read! From the first sentence until the end I was laughing so hard! The part about the dinghy was hilarious! Lol! Three words - Funniest Story Ever! ::Clicks story link to read again::
LiebesengelKarin
2007-08-25
ch 1,
abuseDamn you... I nearly choked on my laughter at the lifeboat scene... *her tummy still hurts*
the ending is.. all right... but the part there he shoot his own ship away and all... was so great^^
JackOfBladesX
2007-01-29
ch 1,
abuseHAHA!

That was hilarious! A stupid (Hero IV). I love how he kept mixing up oders like that, lol.
RWT
2005-10-01
ch 1, anon.
abuse“Ready the cannons!” he shouted. Snowe let out a sigh of relief. Maybe Gale did get his head together…

“Fire the dinghy!” The command only made Snowe slap his head.
A. NuEvil
2005-09-08
ch 1,
abuseROTFLOL!

I'm dying here. That is TOO FUNNY!

I'm playing SIV right now. I happen to like the game...haven't played any of the others, but I really enjoyed this.

Oh, the images going through my head...

:D
Jonathan Priest
2005-09-08
ch 1,
abuseOh my God, I couldn't stop laughing. When you had him fire the poopdeck at the enemy I rolled over and died. This was so hysterically funny. And a great way to show off how pathetic the SIV hero was. In my opinion, he was the worst of all the games. Great job.
Peril
2005-06-12
ch 1, anon.
abuseLove
whitewolf221
2005-05-24
ch 1,
abuseHa! This was extremely funny, especially the part about the dinghy. I found myself laughing out loud quite a few times as I was reading this. Good job with this story.
Salacassera
2005-05-23
ch 1,
abuseI couldn't help laughing out loud a few times while reading this, especially the part with the dinghy.
bananaspawn (not logged in)
2005-05-21
ch 1, anon.
abusethis was really interesting, with the nautical terms and all. i can't stop imagining the chaos if this really happened. ^_^
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