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JaneGray 2007-03-01 ch 7,	abuseThis is a very interesting and well-written story, I like how you managed to gather all the characters in the series without breaking canon and writing them IC. I have a feelings that this fict will end up Dante/Lady. I'm usually a die-hard Dante/Trish shipper, but I occasionally read and write Dante/Lady, I'm curious to see how the Dante/Lady/Joe triangle will play out.
klaske 2006-10-08 ch 6, anon.	abuseOf course, someone who played the games should know all this but some people go into a fandom and read fanfics without playing the games.
Klaske 2006-10-07 ch 5, anon.	abuseOk. Nice storyline, but it might be a bit cofusing for anyone who doesn't know much about Devil may cry, or hasn't played all of the games. Your stories might get better if you'd get more structure into them. But interesting nevertheless.
destructo888 2006-07-15 ch 7,	abuseI really enjoyed this. It answered alot of questions. But wheres the next Chapter
Lori 2006-02-17 ch 7, anon.	abuseSweet! I like this chapter, as I do all your chapters of this story. It's all suspenseful and stuff, and it should stay that way. You should add GORE to eet! Gore is always good! ^_^ (huggle)
Backdraft 2006-02-10 ch 3,	abusehaha, loved the part concerning the bike. Got flashbacks when I used to glance at Pokemon :D. Anyway, I like the potential in this. I'm still a little curious as to where Trish wants him to go, and how it relates to this bonus epilogue to DMC3, but I still have a lot of reading to do :op. Nice work, though.
warpaint 2006-02-06 ch 7,	abuseYAY! Lady's back and kicking some boty! lol. But anyways, it's good to see you update this V. I really can't wait to read the next chappy!
Hayden 2006-02-04 ch 7, anon.	abuseVery nice eas glued to the screen,as usaul, the rest of the srory came back to me as I read it, was very good, am looking forward to the next chapter!
Anonymous 2006-02-03 ch 7, anon.	abuseM. I want Joachim.
Jackpot 2006-02-03 ch 7, anon.	abuseWow, nice chapter! Good to see you back finally. :) You use very nice and poetic descriptions here! I can't wait to see more. Keep up the excellent writing!
Laryna6 2006-02-03 ch 7,	abuseOh, this story! I liked it. A couple more chapters left? I hope they're done soon. The OC's decent, and the baddie being a human wanting to be a demon fits with the series. Too often baddies are made-up demons when it's clear that Mundus is Dante's main enemy, or more powerful servants of Mundus when he was trying his best to beat him on Mallet and would have used them then if he had them. He gave her Artemis? I like that touch. I also like the instant he sees her again, that's well done.
The Tyrant Hamster 2006-02-03 ch 7, anon.	abuseWhile this chapter itself was good, I think the true soul and genius or your writing is in what you have set up, and although I cannot claim to know what you've got in store, if I'm any guess it will be good. Two things that I'm very interested in are Joe, Lady's man as it were, and Dante and Lady's reunion, firstly Joe though. I'm quite captivated by this guy, since in my experience you don't use created characters much, so putting someone who, as far as I know is a character of your own devising somewhere as pivotal as Lady's heart makes me very interested to see what you do with him. Firstly I say this because I know that you've got a lot of respect for the integrity of Lady's character, and thus I'm interested to learn more about the man you're writing who deserves her love. Also he's human, and all too prone to death, what with being a created character too, I'm not saying you're not a brave writer but I think you and I know that main characters like Dante, Lady and Trish are less likely to die than people you create yourself, since they are usually vital to the plot. So, the idea of Lady losing another loved one, after her mother, well, that's got some serious weight behind it. My other interest is of course how Dante and Lady will react, especially if Joe does die, because that in turn could create some powerful scenes between Dante and Lady, her collapsing against him in grief, and him wanting to comfort her but at the same time knowing he can't act on any because that in turn could create some powerful scenes between Dante and Lady, her collapsing against him in grief, and him wanting to comfort her but at the same time knowing he can't act on any feelings he may have for her, not at such a tragic time. And that's just one way things could go, one roll of the dice. Also, the city itself was a nice touch, I'd obviously read about it to a degree in the last chapter, but your descriptions here really do put me in mind of a pretty damn impressive battlefield, and makes me wonder who commands it, with that self-repairing building trick and all. So, given all these possibilities, to see what you actually come up with, with these ingredients, I look forward to reading whatever you decide to cook up next 8). Keep up the great work, if for no other reason, then to not leave me hanging, because I'm invested in this one, I really want to see how it turns out :D.
aoi senshi 2006-02-03 ch 7,	abuseoh lovely!! luv this chappie!! continue soon! :D
Iesha 2006-02-03 ch 7, anon.	abuseGreat chapter! I especially loved the first few introductory paragraphs, the description was wonderful. Great balance between the description, action and dialogue!
Vylet Lust 2006-02-03 ch 7,	abuseLove it and well written! LOL! Please, continue? Update very soon, yo! A very interesting fanfic of yours. Keep it up! ~lol, p.k.

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