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| TheBeautyOfTheGrave 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseAw!! Thats so sad! I can see this happening (though I dont want to cos its too sad!) Please update if you can, it's really good...AND REALLY SAD! |
| gdminority 2008-01-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, it is a very good fiction^^i loved it I have seen that you love Green Day too?:) great they are the best sorry for the language, I don't speak english |
| SymphonyOfSound 2007-01-29 ch 1, | abuseooh nice. loved it -SoS |
| smithyfan 2006-05-03 ch 1, | abuseAh i LOVE this fic you MUST MUST MUST continue it. You really portrayed the characters perfectly and I loved Andrews little vunerable spell showing that he does have a heart even if he's blocked his feelings out. I feel so bad for justin he's ace tho well done on an absolutely brilliant fic x |
| DogsruleW 2006-04-24 ch 1, | abusegah. you seriously need to continue this, it is soo good and the way it stops is driving me insane!! |
| imakeeper 2006-03-17 ch 1, | abusepoor justin |
| Spikey the Neon BlowFish 2006-01-02 ch 1, | abuseohmygod! It's 1:45 in the morning and I'm bored out of my mind (because I seem not to sleep any more) and I start randomly wondering if there are Justin/Andrew fanfic. I didn't think there would be so thank you for proving me wrong. Much applause for a job very well done. -Spike |
| Matt91 2005-12-07 ch 1, | abuseHey, great story! Loved it! |
| FireKai 2005-08-22 ch 1, | abuseGood story! |
| Daniel 2005-08-17 ch 1, anon. | abuseLovely story :) Please write some more! |
| suckers love 2005-08-10 ch 1, | abusewow. |
| Secret Snoopy 2005-07-31 ch 1, | abuseThis was very well-written. I don't think I found a single typing mistake. And the story was nice too. Great work. :) |
| Yimon The Catman 2005-07-03 ch 1, | abuseCompliments on the story! In Desperate Housewives, Justin does come across as a slightly one dimensional character (though apparently not next season), and I't good to read something in which he has feelings. Unless you just think he's hot? Yeah. Me too^-^. |
| Abby Lewis 2005-06-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseAmazingly good... love the quotes. |
| kc 2005-06-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love what you did with these characters. You made them come alive with thoughts and feelings. The tears and the kisses show how vulnerable and young Andrew is, while his denials show the walls he has alreay built around his heart. Like a tease, he lets Justin see his inner self. Then, he turns around and shuts him out. But Justin is already in love with the boy that Andrew could be. Justin is like a tragic hero who reaches for the elusive prize knowing the odds are stacked against him. You really set up their relationship very realistically. It's a brilliant piece of fanfic. Hopefully, you will write more about it! |