A beautiful story. Thank you for writing it.

This has to be the most beautiful seras intergra piece I've ever read. you really got into the heads of the characters, and I really appreciate that, as I lovve hellsing. I'm really sorry to see that it ended at chapter 25!

Integra stayed integra. which not most fanfictions do.

she's a really tough character to write about, because of her demeanor.

GOOD GOING!

anyways. should you write more, just know that this was amazing!

good, chapter. You still have those little mistakes with 'me' and 'my' and various other easily misspelled words, no big deal.

More importantly, I was super confused when you changed points of view between Integra and Seras, maybe you could put up a separating line, or an extra space to signify something is different.

hm, I have mixed feelings about this. I love the Integra/Seras pairing but I'm kind of bothered by the fact that Seras has to deny her very being for Integra to be with her. I mean, isn't love about accepting people as they are? Just because Seras acknowledges that she is a vampire, doesn't mean she has to go insane and go on a killing spree. Really well written though.

That was a wonderful fic!

dude, your bitter! just admit it, it would be better for all party involve

i spotted some spelling mistake, nothing too serious, missing a letter or just messing up the words arangement and such.

i guess it's humbling to see even Interga shake and cry

dark, through it's interesting to read about their relationship

dare i say it? fluff! in hellsing none the less...cute yet oddly scary :P

interesting, now i need to go through the rest of the chapters, excuse me while i digest the whole fic

Wow. This was amazingly good. You managed to keep the flow of the story going at all times without it becoming choppy or disjointed, so good job. I really liked the way you wrote Integra and Seras' characters, they were full of emotion without being over the top. Only thing I would mention is that it would've been less confusing if there had been visible divides between the POVs. In some chapters it wasn't obvious the POV had changed until I'd read about half of it.

All in all this was excellent though, I've really enjoyed it.

Wow, it's finally finished. O_O From the preceding chapters, I couldn't tell if this fic was gonna have a happy ending or not (I had visions of Integra putting a silver bullet into Seras' head), but I'm glad it did. _

Thank you for the great read. Cheers! _

Awesome.

Aw it's over _;; Well i LOVED it! Really the ending was great. I like how Integra was the one who came to her, after all, she was the stubborn and cold one. So for Integra to be the fisrt to look for Seras was perfect! I'm not sure i like the Seras not fighting thing, but it does make sense *sigh* It was really great and one of my favorite Hellsing fics So cute and well harsh _;; ZANK YOU and you should start another fic :P Still, you have a lot of talent, thanks for sharing it with us!

JA NE

hooray! good story _