realy funny story update soon

how much SNL, Kids in the hall and South Park do you watch? What the crap? You're just like me! oh no...maybe my alter ego wrote this and i'm just talking to myself...HELP ME! x_x

whoa...i like the part wit KoRn...mostly just jon davis...if only he wasn't dating that porn star, i would have a chance...ne way, i'm glad you could acknowledge how Trunks is a stupid fag. And what do you mean depths of hell? KoRn arn't satanists!

ooooooo, i like! love the language, lol! i really wish KoRn would beat the crap out of the Backstreet Girls

backstreet boys are gay and, reetared but, Trunks is hot in FINE!

Ok that was the funniest ing story i have ever read all that mutha ing cusing was god damn unnessary though god damn all i heard was why did you ing cuss so ing much. Good job on killing those ing executives npe like there skanky asses anyways keep up the ing good work.

Peace out with the playboy bunny Big B

Very funny, I like it a lot, I think Kagato should make more. Kagato is COOL, ok enough I need to talk about the story. A story should have humor, romance, and action well this story has 2 of 3 and I give it a 9 on a scale of 10. If you like gross action and humor, and hate Backstreet Boys and hate Trunks then you will love this story. So, enjoy when ever you get the chance to read or you have nothing to do then READ THIS story, it's great! C ya, if you have a prob wit it then take it out wit me and leave Kagato alone, he is cool and makes great stories.

Blackmage18

WHAT DID YOU DO TO THE BACKSTREET BOYS? AGH! everything else is ok. I like little Joe. he didn't do or say anything, but that's ok. he was 1 of the only people in the story that didn't make me angry. Joe and Yamcha. everyone else made me mad. o, and Y DID U DO THAT 2 THE BACKSTREET BOYS? that's all...um...bye.

that sucked! sorry, but i dont like it the least bit. its not that funny. i think you gotta work on that.

LOL I...CANT...STOP...LAUFING...!

it's weird, but very funny. i liked that part where Trunks was singing...can you put another chapter up soon? thanks!