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| animelove4 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseplease update soon. i really like the story or tell me what's going to happen. the story looks great! |
| foxgurl4591 2007-10-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseSeems interesting enough. But did you have to make Yami evil? He's one of my favourite characters, AND HE ISN'T EVIL he just a little over dramatic. |
| MaterialGirl69 2007-06-24 ch 1, | abuseYour writing was very detailed and very accurate- the plot seems well thought out and everyone is in character, a great start!! Try to make the next chapter a bit more engaging though! |
| shanichan11 2005-09-03 ch 1, | abuseWOW! its really good so far...im surprised u only hav 1 review cuz u rite beautifully and the plot is great...well update soon! |
| ANAYAS-CREATER 2005-05-27 ch 1, | abuseNot bad. I like it. Update soon! |