hmm, intriguing, one to Episode two now! *grins*

Wow! Amazing Job!! I haven't been that excited with a story for a long time! That really kept me wanting more.. I zipped through that story... Can't wait to read the sequal!!

Great story, couldnt stop reading. Hope you keep writing.

Hey! WOW wow WOW Wow that was so awesome! I sent you an email with all my comments, the last chapter was really fantastic, the dance was so sweet and I laughed a lot throughout it. Great to see the characters coming together to have a fun time like that. That dream is freaky. I guess it is leading into the sequel. I wonder what will happen next. But wow, that final section with Remy caught me by surprise. So, his third son is actually alive, or alive in some way. Death? Is he death, like as in the Grim Reaper? Human baby? Don't tell me that it has something to do with Kim. I have a feeling that it does! But you have to write the sequel soon, don't leave us all waiting for too long! Thanks for the AWESOME story, write soon!

Great Story...I definately will be back for the second one...Just one question..Who's the baby?...I'm a little confused on that one...Well, guess you'll explain in the next story...PLEASE Please start that one soon...

OMG. I totally loved it. Now you let me wanted more. Please work fast in that sequel because I need something good to read. I'll better write you an email with my comments.

Mili

Oh man was that ever a freakin an awesome story. I can't wait for the sequel! Awesome job and it was an excellent story. I'll be waiting for the sequel.

wow fabulous story and I'm anxiously awaiting the sequel. I love how they all slept together in the end just like under the "stars" before the battle.

THanks for clearing up the whole break up thing and pregnancy etc.. i wouldn't have figured it out. So thanks very much.

Wonderful fantastic etc i what i have to say about this.
Smiles,
"C"

I'm glad that you still haven't taken the easy way out- that it's still going to be hard for them to deal with what they've missed in the two months, and how their friends and family are going to deal with Tommy and Kim suddenly being together again.

You've missed on apostrophe in 'friends shoulders' though. I suppose the black dress could be foreshadowing Tommy's role in Dino Thunder, or was that just a coincidence?

I'm not quite sure why Zack asking if Kim wanted another cup of punch made her laugh... or was it a previous comment? It's not terribly clear. Great Kim characterisation again, although when you've written 'she’s instantly' do you mean 'she'd'?
So what did Bulk and Skull do? Did it invovle getting covered in food?

You have Jason asking to steal Tommy's wife... did they get married or was that a mistake?

Great group characterisation, Kim's comment about her dress being too short in all the wrong places and Tommy's reaction made me laugh, as did Zack forbiding her from playing charades.

Uh oh... I guess Kim's dream, and the repercussions of her time rewind will be the focus in the sequel, it sounds interesting. You've put an apostrophe in 'other's' when there shouldn't be one and missed italicing one of Kim's thoughts as well as some finishing speech marks.

A ha! So I was right, the third brother was alive! That was a horrible place to end though! What human child was killed? And you killed Remy... I'm a little unsure where Ledle's loyalties lie...

The last chapter *sniffs*. It's been a wonderful fic which I've enjoyed reading so much. I'm really glad to hear that there is going to be a sequel!
Until the sequel, thanks for writing and posting,
Jade

uh wow thats freakin amazing .. let me know when theyre up ok ttyl

This was an awesome story. I loved it. I can't wait for the sequal to come.

That was...WOW. That was such a great story. I loved the way that you described them while they tried to find out what had been happening. I was wondering though, when Jason asked Tommy if he could dance with Kim, he said 'wife'. Did they get married at some point or was Jason just joking and they didn't say anything because they knew he was joking? Or, did you not mean to say 'wife'? Anyway, I loved the story and the way you ended it. Poor Remy. He was killed by his own son. That must really suck. When you do the sequel, please don't end it with Kim not with Tommy. In my mind, that is just wrong. Especially if she's with Jason. I've always thought of them as having more of a brother/sister relationship. It would just screw with my poor mind to have them together. It is your story, but I was hoping to persuade you to take my thoughts into consideration. That dream Kim had was terrible! She just can't get a break. Poor thing. She just gets back to her frinds and family and she has to have thet dream. Since this is your story, I'm guessing that there is more to the dream than it just being a dream. That dream is partly why I plead with you about Kim and Tommy ending up together in the sequel. Just keep up the GREAT work and please post the sequel soon.

This was an amazing story. You had me hooked from chapter 1. I hope the next part of this story is posted soon. Thanks again for a wonderful story.

I cannot wait for the next part of this story!

First, Didn't you day that you had a problem with your computer, I was sad and happy, sad because you wouldn't go to update but happy because I could finally take the time to review your work. But you didn't let me time, Well I'll send you an e-mail. I couldn't wait to get home so I read the chapter now, I loved it, I totally love your story and I can't wait for the final chapter and of course I for the sequel. I know it's going to be great. Congratulations for your work and I hope you keep writing more.

Bye

Mili