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| chica rica 2006-06-06 ch 2, anon. | abusethis story is not written very well even though you have a beta its just not good. if sara ran out she would'nt come back and be all professional she probably would stay outside. i'm sorry and i dont want to hurt your feelings but this story is not written well. |
| Jenuine 2005-11-06 ch 2, | abuseha ha. i cant stop laughing. that one was hilarious. ha ha. bravo. |
| JennCorinthos 2005-09-04 ch 2, | abuseI loved it, Please write S/W fics these two are my favorite couple and I am glad that I am not the only one who has realized it. JENNIFER |
| CSIslave 2005-08-07 ch 2, | abusehow sweet! sorry I didn't review for the last chapter, I was really anxious to see how the team responded! Great story, I loved it! |
| Phelipa 2005-06-13 ch 2, anon. | abuseNo! It's done? Not already!? aw :'( |
| macs 2005-05-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseAh ah... I can picture the scene : caught on the camera! Pretty original, and very well written |
| wplove 2005-05-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseLOL! This is the second time Rick and Sara have been caught on camera. Whew, can't wait to see what's coming next.! |