this story is not written very well even though you have a beta its just not good. if sara ran out she would'nt come back and be all professional she probably would stay outside. i'm sorry and i dont want to hurt your feelings but this story is not written well.

ha ha. i cant stop laughing. that one was hilarious. ha ha. bravo.

I loved it, Please write S/W fics these two are my favorite couple and I am glad that I am not the only one who has realized it.

JENNIFER

how sweet! sorry I didn't review for the last chapter, I was really anxious to see how the team responded! Great story, I loved it!

No! It's done? Not already!? aw :'(

Ah ah... I can picture the scene : caught on the camera! Pretty original, and very well written

LOL! This is the second time Rick and Sara have been caught on camera. Whew, can't wait to see what's coming next.!