great story.

WOW.

Have read this whole story over the last two days, and just WOW.

Your ability at writing good quality crimefic as well as drawing out the NCIS characters (in this case Tony and Gibbs) is really very excellent.

Top quality, loved it. Definitely a major favourite.

mj

Wow. A fascinating look into just what possessed Gibbs to hire Tony - I think this made it into my personal canon for this particular series. Thanks for the fantastic read, and good luck with whatever muses next happen to cross your keyboard!

I truely enjoyed this story. It was very well thought out and very well written. Kudos to you! I'm adding you to my Author Alerts.

seet chap

This was a really great read. I couldn't stop reading it until I reached the end. Good job.

Hey! This was a well-written, believable story. It explains a lot about Tony's past and his relationship with Gibbs. It is insightful and moving. I look forward to reading the sequel.

have recently been a bit obsessed with NCIS. watching the series and just the last two days reading fanfic. love it.

Wow! I stumbled across one of your other stories through a rec site, and couldn't stop reading. Your Tony is amazing and your plots are fantastic. The bits about 'the frog' -really being his daughter, or running a terrorist cell Tony stopped- in particular were just on the right side of plausible.

The way Tony interacts with other characters; Gibbs, McGee, Abby, Ziva, Pete, even his smary ex-partner is also wonderful. There's depth, and backstory, feeling, and a care-free veneer. Your Tony can read people, but chooses not to flaunt that knowledge, and acts almost childishly because that's what works. I've seen quite a few authors attempt to create a character like that, and usually they feel clunky and overdone, this feels smooth.

I wish there were more to read, though I am new both to the TV show and your writing. I'm sorry, but I have to ask; do you plan to write that sequal, or are you done with fanfiction/ncis? If you have time and are reading this, could you please send me any reccomendations if you have any?

Thanks so much for writing!
~mb

really liked it, but i was bored and it was really long and slow. a sweet story for summer reading, not so much for reading during the school year.

Wow! Wonderfully written, and excellent characterisation. I love Tony and Gibbs' interactions, and it's wonderful to see a story about Tony's background. It also ties in nicely with how Gibbs hires Kate - has already worked with her, and offers her a job when her previous employer drops her. All in all, a very good read.

WOW! This is a very VERY good story.
Thanks for sharing!!
:-)

wow.
ever thought about writing professionally?? i haven't seen your profile yet, but it wouldn't surprise me if you were a professional writer.
i also swear i'm not sucking up.
i've read a lot of glorified fanfictions (books about series, like Max. A. Collins writes in CSI. and other police tv shows), and this is way better than what i've read. reading this, you got the character of gibbs down to a tee, the way he thinks, the way you alternate between his soft and bastardly personalities, what i think he thinks about DiNozzo... And Tony! I love the way you wrote about his insecurities, about his life experience, his joking personality and how he is so much more beyond that, what i think the tv show portrays, but fanfiction writers seem to forget most of the time. I think you got inside his head really well too, and exactly how I would expect Tony to react in such a constant bad situation. he still hadn't his stable life, and his co-workers seemed to pretty much hate him *excluding lab techs*, so i believe it's the reason his funny/sarcastic side appears only in stress situations.
I could go on and on. This is truly one of the best fanfictions i've read, in any fandom. The plot and development was fantastic, character building, amazing, writing style: couldn't stop reading.
I just have to add: I miss Abby. She's one of my favorite characters, and I thought her part in this fanfiction was pretty much non-existent. I love her scene with Tony, and her fling with Pete. Not counting that, Gibbs may as well overnight his samples for testing, because she was MIA. I don't know if you had more planed for her, but I expected her to pop out and just start rambling about the new guy to Gibbs, or showing off her amazing forensics skills to Tony.
Hugs, Bella

i love it

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