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| Mayhem21 2008-07-15 ch 17, | abuseThis was such a good story. I found it the other day and read it straight through. I loved the plot and the twists and the turns. I loved watching Gibbs and Tony bond, and I really enjoyed your take on how Tony was treated by Baltimore PD. I absolutely can't wait for new stuff, especially the possible sequel. In the meantime I think I'll go read some of your other works. Happy Writing ;) ~Thalia013 |
| LisaG 2008-06-26 ch 17, anon. | abuseBravo! Excellent take on how Tony may have made it to NCIS...and a great crime story, too. Nicely done! |
| LisaG 2008-06-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseHee hee! Just finished chapter 1 and loving this already...can't wait to read the rest! |
| ievandie 2008-06-17 ch 17, | abuseGreat story, I know how it is a long and sometimes though job writing novels but it's worth the reward (especially for us readers...) I love the growing friendship and insights into their caracters as seen in the serie. Iris. |
| Dark Archer 2008-06-14 ch 17, anon. | abusethat was AMAZING! I loved the split points of view. The alteratin between Gibbs and Tony. I thought it was really well written and I'm glad you compleated it, I've read so many stories that have great potentionl, but the writers can't finish. that was really awsome thanks for the great read. Sayanara^^ |
| hitchcock_starlet 2008-06-14 ch 17, anon. | abuseI hope you do (did?) write that sequel! This was a fantastic story. The NCIS characters were entirely believable and it's great to have some palpable background on Tony and Gibbs in mind. Thanks for sharing!! Don't stop!! |
| hitchcock_starlet 2008-06-13 ch 4, anon. | abuseWow. Just wow. This is an exceptional story so far. It's so *believable,* which is what most fanfiction lacks!! I can very much see this story as part of the show cannon. Looking forward to continuing. |
| hitchcock_starlet 2008-06-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseHuh. Wow. This is probably the best NCIS fanfic that I've read, so far. Haven't read much content yet but your writing is fantastic and your character portrayal hasn't done any reaching yet, or gone over the top, like most fanfics do. It has lots of potential!! I'm on to the next now... |
| Darkness Be Mine 2008-05-28 ch 17, | abuseAbsolutely FABULOUS story, and EXCEPTIONAL writing. You're so my most favourite author on this whole damn site, I tell you. *nods* AWESOME ending for an awesome (if occasionally disturbing - those poor girls...) story! If you ever get around to writing/publishing a novel, let me know. I'm totally up for reading that too! Keep up the awesome work! |
| Darkness Be Mine 2008-05-28 ch 16, | abusePoor Tony's all shot to hell and it's all that evil BUM'S fault. That guy is a REAL SICKO, you know... REALLY sick! *sighs* What's even worse is that there's really people LIKE that out in the world. *shudders* I loved that Gibbs is so concerned however... He's "never lost an agent"... *sighs* Until Kate... |
| Darkness Be Mine 2008-05-28 ch 15, | abuseOh... Wow... Didn't see THAT one coming! Yikes! Okay... Another AWESOME chapter. I am in several different stages of awe where your writing is concerned. It's incredible, and I'm totally HOOKED! |
| Darkness Be Mine 2008-05-28 ch 14, | abusePoor Tony. I just want to hug the guy at this point. Losing someone as important to him as Marie was. That's got to be tough, and it sucks that he's got to take that with him forever; that he's never going to be able to forget it. |
| Darkness Be Mine 2008-05-28 ch 13, | abuseMax is HIGHLY disturbing! But that was one FABULOUS chapter! DiNozzo facing off with the drug boss guy... That was totally fabulous, and just how calm and composing and, even when he was outnumbered, just how THREATENING he actually WAS to the guy. *nods* Fabulous! |
| Darkness Be Mine 2008-05-28 ch 12, | abuseEEK! Why do I have a feeling this is going to end badly? Go Tony for figuring it all out and having the guts to go deal with it himself. Don't know WHAT Gibbs'll think about it though. I'm hooked, addicted, and am going to go read the next chapter... |
| Darkness Be Mine 2008-05-28 ch 11, | abuseDude... what I WOULDN'T do to those dispatch guys now! I hate every single one of them. That's totally awful, what they're doing. Sitll... I LOVE Gibbs' backhanded job offer, even IF Tony didn't really notice it. |