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The Denominator
2006-08-15
ch 1,
abuseThere's a lot to be interpreted in this fic (at least I think so.)

For example, where you stated that Kankurou had his first weapon from the mother, and Temari had gotten hers from the father, and Gaara was had his from both parents (in a way. With his birth and all.)

...Maybe I'm digging to deeply into it.

Again, you have said so much with a few words. That's talent. I like the Sand ninja. I like this fic. Good job.
Hoppy-chan
2006-04-22
ch 1,
abuseMorbid. Awesome.
kinokokichigai
2005-10-20
ch 1,
abuseoh, the angst. that part that you wrote about temari killing, and then getting rewarded for it...that was beautifully chilling. please continue writing!
Sariachan-KokiriLeaf
2005-06-20
ch 1,
abuseI liked Gaara's parte the most...and I wonder if this is a oneshot or you will post new chapters. :)
Klayter McCabe
2005-06-17
ch 1,
abuse::sigh:: So many perfect sentences here.

"He watches Temari clean the spine of her fan with a rag, gentle movements that hide the slow decay of blood on its delicate frame."

"Temari only has grace when she concentrates -- hands rough with grit, fan held loosely before her face with a smile that burns like desert heat."

Temari's father congratulating her on her first kill. Kankurou in the corner with his dolls and purple face-paint.

You're a very talented writer; I enjoy stopping by and reading your stuff.
A. Krisis
2005-05-29
ch 1,
abuse...

-twitch-

...nice writing...

-twitch-
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