Eh...This is pretty good by my standards, but I'd just like to point out Ciara's name - the names in Avatar: The Last Airbender generally have a more Oriental and Asian(ish) theme. I think Ciara is either French or Modern English style (eh, I'm too lazy to look it up).

I think that maybe a little more length would be better, too, but not necessary. Literacy's pretty good, too. =D

Sweet! That stupid airbender is dead, and my fave guy in the FN killed him!

*shakes head*Your OC is a Sue Zuko is vey OOC.Look up on how the charcters act and come back without a Sue and I might finish it.Maybe.

THIS WAS THE MOST DISGRACEFUL THING I'VE EVER READ IN MY ENTIRE LIFE! YOU COMPLETELY ABUSED PRINCE ZUKO'S EMOTIONS!

Ohemgee! I stayed up until 3:00 AM reading this... I couldn't go to bed until I was done... IT WAS SO AWESOME! *runs off to read sequel*

Hey i love this story so much can twait till the next chapter.

I know what you mean by your obsessed with the name. I'm obsessed with both Kim and Nyla (Well Nyla is just a new name I became obsessed with) ANyway so this wasa a great story I'm going on to read the sequal. Later. K15

hehe crazy tea addict!! hey i have a wonderful idea! for a sequel, you could make it about the long wait for grandchildren... you know like a diary of what has happened through her pregnancy. the mood swings, cravings for the most outragious foods, and constant complains about being fat!! i think your readers would love that!!(especially me! ^-^) if you need any help you know where to find me. (just click my name on the review and boom!)

Sayonara! ^0~

Lol! Only Iroh would be the person to not knock before entering. I really hope to see the next chapter soon!

how i love iroh humor...

you have no idea how much i hate aang...so yes, you are good, very good!

dump all tea over board? crazy Zuko! tea is fabulous, like this story!

tea? it kills brains? oh no my brain must be long gone then! ah! i drink soo much tea! ah chai, green, lemon, orange, black, irish...any tea you can think of i drink it! ah...oh well...i lovee tea! along with ur story.

Hmm. Pretty good so far. A few minor grammarical mistakes, but it's very interesting. On to the next chapter...

you made Ciara really smart! that whole little tricky thing with making herself a commander and making Zuko and her present aang together. damn, thats just brilliant!