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| KiyaMadarame 2008-04-25 ch 1,  | abuseReally Nice! Every word of it! ^^ really! ~ |
| Blahsblah2001 2006-01-31 ch 1, | abusewoot for irony! Dontcha hate it when you have a crush on somebody and you don't know if they like you or not? _melissa |
| bffimagine 2005-09-18 ch 1, | abuseWell then, GET GAMBLING, BOYS! You BOTH know you WANT to... |
| Terra Fire 2005-07-01 ch 1, | abuseVery good, I really like it. Perhaps you chould write a second part, it would really tie things up. ;} ~VGT~ |
| TheRomanGeneral 2005-06-01 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting. I like this gentle exploration of characters that you're delving into. If you intend to continue, please I urge you too with the same tone you have set here. Nicely done. Though, you may want to consider seperating the two viewpoints slightly - an extra line might work well. |
| narrizan 2005-05-23 ch 1, | abuseis this a one shot...you know you wanna put'em together...sorry i can't help it,just being greedy. this one is full of longing and lovely with it. |