To all the flamers out there...This story happens to be very creative in terms of character and plot...If you have something against gay people, go to Japan and I'll personally kick your asses! You hypocrites are just jealous that you don't have the writing abilities fanfiction writers have and just flame their work! Why the hell did you read this if you know it was yaoi,huh? You basterds were put on this earth to CO-EXIST! If you can't get along with yaoi, then you can't get along in life! I may be a chao, but I know a hell of a lot about life than you basterds do! So either leave nicely or don't give us crappy comments! Heck, you may be gay yourself and won't admit it because your old man's gonna skin you alive if he finds out! Have a nice EXISTANCE! _

And Luna Tiger, quill'n'parchment, keep up the good work and don't let these hypocrites stop you!

CHAOH! o

Your good at writeing and i was very pissed when i wrote that thats why it didnt make much sense.

ACK! ZERO IS BASS! MY TWO FAVOURITE PEOPLE ARE THE SAME!

My dreams just came true. Fucking awsome story dude. Keep going?

OMG that was REALLY good... terrfic interpretation and incredibly original! I really hope there's more to come! *puppy eyes* Please?

O.O *blinkblink* whoa... now that's... odd... and possible, and omg, i have an idea! _ thank you!

YAOI SUCKS (OKAY IRIS AND ZERO ARE KIND OF CUTE TOGETHER) PLEASE DON'T HURT MY HEROS MANHOOD WITH YAOI STUPID GAY STUFF OK!

I likies!

you said that this fic have Imaginable shounen-ai.i know that.

but i know u make this ·$%&@#[]* fic to make yaoi fans imagine gay stuff here on purpose.

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I HATE YOU¡

Holy-! How did I miss this! O.o Nyarth! I read this up at the realm of potatoes and things! *_* You need to go post chapter 3 so I can read it again! Chuuuuu! 3 The idea seems to have been steamrollered over and over, but you still brought it alive! Eto...where did the phrase "...leave me untouched..." come from? ; I'm stupid, I never got through any of the original RM games...'cept the first. O.o; But that had no plot, so I'll be quiet now. And all you dumb flamers, all the shounen ai IS in your head...*wink wink* WHO'S sick and gay? *giggles and runs off*

@.o What the hell? They aren't gay in this. It's called really close friendship. People complain about them together when they are, but when someone (who normally does stick them together) finally *doesn't* @_@ you complain even more! For crying out loud! Flamers are hypocrites! All shounen you see is in your head! What a bunch of idiots!

all you think about is gay rockman storys how disgusting

YOU SUCKS¡

i hate your fic¡

I was surprised by how much I liked this story. It's emotional and deeply affecting, and there is a strange beauty to the language. My only criticism is that the resolution of Chapter 2 felt too easy (just the last line or two). Still, definitely worth a peek.