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| Vaunam 2008-07-24 ch 2, | abusePerfect. |
| Evil Illusions 2008-04-23 ch 2, | abuseI like it. It's nicely written. |
| Ahria 2008-04-15 ch 2, | abuseBeautiful and sad. I liked it very much. |
| Cla.V 2008-03-30 ch 2, | abuseLoved it. Very well written... very, very well written :) Congratulations! Kisses, Cla. |
| Danni 2007-11-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is amazing, I love it! |
| fantasyluv 2007-08-15 ch 2, | abusewut kinda heart-breaking chapter was that?! dont get me wrong.. it was great, but way way to sad... please make a third chapter! zoha |
| FuturePrincess 2007-08-06 ch 2, | abuseThat was such an incredible story! It really did get to the heart of the characters. Good job! |
| Mrs.Chloe Kent 2007-07-05 ch 2, | abuseReally good. Keep up the good work! |
| Mrs.Chloe Kent 2007-07-05 ch 1, | abuseThat was very good. Really sweet. Great job! |
| milly_729 2007-06-17 ch 2, anon. | abuseaww thats was really sweet good job x. |
| Meatballheadedprincess14 2007-06-12 ch 2, | abuseThat was very emotional for me... I've gone through the same thing- have thought the same thoughts Usagi felt, and know the pain of how people are today not expressing how they feel like Usagi and Mamoru didn't. I think the thing I enjoy the most about your writing, is how it's almost like I'm not reading a webpage on a website, but infact that you're talking to me and telling me this story- either about your life or not- whatever it is, it really keeps me interested. |
| Meatballheadedprincess14 2007-06-12 ch 1, | abuseYou definitely succeeded at making a very fluent and a very different kind of P.O.V. Have you ever gone through anything like what you wrote about here so much so that writing it brought back those feelings and caused you to write exactly how everything was? sorry if I'm just being confusing. |
| xmasberry 2007-05-05 ch 2, | abusewhat are you talking about? Of course it's good. Only those two miniscule chapters made my heart tingle. It's good. It's sad. It's tragic. I can't believe there are only 78 reviews... |
| AngelMoon Girl 2007-01-23 ch 2, | abuseAW! You are so on the ball with their feelings. |
| Aislinn Cailin 2007-01-19 ch 2, | abuseOh my god ..! What! You can't possibly end it off like that! Please continue *beg* *beg* *beg* PLEASE..! |