Amazing!

Pardon me while I slide down in a corner and cry.

I was also upset with the ending to this movie, and I think that this justifies it quite well, although there are millions of people around the world like me who would've like to seen Edward and Kim together. But in this it gives them both enough time to understand that they can't, even though a single "goodbye" was enough to give a realization. Beautiful. Loved it :)

Hi Allison E.L. Cleckler!

A beautiful story. I love the movie, and I was so unhappy with the ending as well. But it would be so good, if Kim would have stayed with Edward forever. But she couldn't, both of them knew. Edward didn't belong to Kim's world, and Kim didn't belong to Edward's word. But I'm so sad, that they had to apart from eachother and could never see eachother again.

I really love your fanfiction and thanks for sharing it with everyone.

Great Job!

Simply wonderful, wished that happened though...

This is amzing. I cried at its beauty.

I Liked it a lot! really good! i felt the same way about Edward Scissorhands!

Stunning. Absolutely stunning.

this story was definitely NOT substandard. this was great! you expressed emotion with very little words and had edward and kim in character perfectly. well done.

Wonderful and sad. I cried as I read it. You really captured the feel of the movie.

Beautiful...I couldn't stop crying..

This was wonderful. It was beautifully written adn brought me to tears.

This would make a good story if she wouls have stayed.

This story is anything but sub-standard. It is tear-jerking, and beautifully written.

I throughly enjoyed this alternate ending. This ending i personaly think is much better then the way the movie ended, i have to agree with you there. Its very well written

Good story but I saw some flaws, anyone that is going to read this story have probably seen the movie and therefore they do not need to see the whole ending again.