|
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Alynn McBride 2005-05-23 ch 1, | abuseI like it. A little awkward at times, and a couple of spelling errors, but it's still really good- the first original KH fic I've seen for a while. keep it up! |
| YumeTakato 2005-05-23 ch 1, | abusevery interesting story so far. =3 I look forward to this read. |
| LadyD 2005-05-23 ch 1, | abusewoot you put it up! ^o^ *places hand on katana* now work on the other stories as well as this one and i'll be happy |
| Mr. Grae 2005-05-23 ch 1, | abuseYou have to continue this story! It's wonderful how you make the impotant parts count so well, while other people do the exact opposite, making small events seem better than the big ones. I also like the idea of Verdal. Continue this story please please please please please please please please please! |