How amazing. Yes, the repetitition works wonderfully. The word choice was also excellent. And, of course, the ending makes the piece.

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A few spelling/grammatical errors, but I loved the repetition-and I'm always intrigued by Utena poetry! Nice work.

Wow. That was a powerful poem. And I normally can not stand poetry, mainly because I never liked it. But that has nothing do to with a writer's skill. I simply don't like "poetry". However, there are some things every now and then that will catch my eye and this sure as hell did. You deeply exspressed this poem and it moved me some/what... good work! Hope to see more by you!^^

Raging Lion

This was beautiful and tragic at the same time. perfectly in character to what I believe Anthy is. Great job!

~Melissa~

You did a fantastic job on this beautiful poem! Great job!

That was beautiful, seriously very good well job done.

Wonderful job! You did swell on this! I'd like to hear more from you!

This was definately original. I like repitition poems, anywho. You did a marvelous job! Maybe you can do one about my favorite couple...Saionji and Juri.

If you are curious about them, you should read, Vulnerability, by Hinoto Nobukaze, or Who's In The Locket and The Unspoken Heart, by Oneesan no Miroku Houshi, or Opening The Wounds by Utena Himemiya.

I think you'd love them.

Beautiful poem you have here. You did a wonderful job and I look forward to seeing more fanfiction from you.

Splendid! It captures the character fully!

Wonderful job! You are a superb poet!

You did a fairly good job with this. Keep on writing to further yourself. Wonderful job!

Wonderful job! Defineately loved it!

Great job!