 TheSimplePrincess 2009-11-13 . chapter 18Truthfully I read this story a few months ago, sorry for not reviewing ages ago but I wasn't sure of what to write.
I love this story. Their relationship builds up gradually with all the ups and downs that make it really interesting. Your style of writing makes me want more. Well, my favourite part is how you didn't have them end up together really fast and you had them pretty in character.
I feel addicted to your story, I hope you keep writing. Fanfiction or original stories I'll definitely be there to read them.
My stories seem so immature and amateur-ish compared to yours.
Oh well, I'll practice and get better. If you have time please give me feedback on my stories :)
TSP. |
 Esmeralda2134 2009-11-02 . chapter 18This story is amazingly written. I never thought some one could manage a story that capsulates love and hate for the same persn so perfectly. I loved it. |
 gateau rose 2009-10-31 . chapter 18your writing is amazing andrea,
i feel privileged to read it (geez...im starting to sound like a little kid- but i suppose i am compared to you) I love the imagery and the words on the parchment...WOW
keep writing because you've got a rare and amazing skill. I've got to read all your other stories (after my exams)
I hope you are planning a career in writing ^_^
gateau rose |
 HP0247 2009-10-26 . chapter 18 I've just finished reading this story and I have such a headache. I was tense during the whole reading, it grabbed my interest, shook me with it's tenderness, and twisted my stomach in a knot with the tension.
This was brillantly told and written. |
 HP0247 2009-10-26 . chapter 5 This is brillant. |
 rauny 2009-10-25 . chapter 18 I almost left without saying how wonderful your writting was.I love the way you gave them time for them to fall in love without them falling in love for 2 hours or a day like most stories do. i never read a story in fanfiction with such advanced writting and im glad I did. |
 jewelledhunter 2009-09-29 . chapter 18I love how there isn't any point where they go, "Damn...suddenly she's pretty." It's a gradual process, as love should be, and they revel in each other's imperfections. I found that so much more realistic than many Dramiones that I've read. Thanks for expanding it beyond the ship that's used for pulp-fiction-style stories and into a genuine love story. |
 starlight 2009-09-19 . chapter 18 Hey there :D
First of all, I would like to applaud your style in writing. It is the first fanfiction that I've have had such immense joy and deep satisfaction in reading, that I was stunned beyond measure when I first set my eyes upon it. You would have to pardon my lack of good language usage, I definitely do not have the good command of English that you posses.
What I loved best about your story was the realistic sense of love, and the utter vulnerability that you managed to portray where others fell short of. I know that it was not your intention to, but I could sense bits and pieces of your individuality hidden in the core of this story- a factor that I found tremendously rewarding as a reader and fan of your writing.
Your descriptions are refreshing in that you don't blindly stick to the norm of Hermione and Draco falling desperately in love, but found ways to paint the imperfections and utter contrasts of their complex yet intriguing characters. In the end, I found that your ending brought a small smile to my face.
Certainly, this is the longest review I've written here in the 2 years that I've been reading fanfiction on this site, but I would think you're definitely worth my time and effort. Thank you so much for the inspiration that you've given me.
I hope that you'll write more stories here and pursue a career in the creative writing field in future, for your talents prove too outstanding to be wasted in anything else. |
 sarahr85 2009-09-15 . chapter 18crazy. deep and crazy :) |
 Katie - Lyn Della Robia 2009-08-13 . chapter 18Best ending of a Dramione that I have EVER read. and I have probably read at least a hundred or more. But back to what I was saying. The best ending I have ever read. |
 Katie - Lyn Della Robia 2009-08-13 . chapter 12Damn it! I thought He was going to kiss Her! Damn it! Again! |
 Katie - Lyn Della Robia 2009-08-13 . chapter 9*furrows brow in confusion* ... HUH?!?!?!?!?!?! |
 Katie - Lyn Della Robia 2009-08-13 . chapter 7i seriously not, what so ever, see where this whole convo will take him. and thats not a bad thing. |
 Katie - Lyn Della Robia 2009-08-13 . chapter 4Break her, break her, break her, break her, break her! |
 Katie - Lyn Della Robia 2009-08-13 . chapter 3*screams* Draco Scorpius Malfoy you are such an Evil EVIL child! You are Disgustingly Cruel and Calculating!
i just had to get that out of my system. |