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| lucydod 2008-01-10 ch 2,  | abuseSo GOOD! I absolutely love it! Your descriptions, the tone, the different aspects of sadness and optimism... I have to admit, I cried.(Souji's my favorite!) Please keep going! (deep bow) |
| Alaena Flame Dragonstar 2007-09-30 ch 2, | abuseVery well written. Is there any chance you might continue this story? |
| Mrs. Velvet Ears 2007-04-25 ch 2, | abuseThis story is so lovely...I wish you would update it :( Please? |
| sakura hatake kakashi'sgrl 2006-11-27 ch 1, | abusethat's a really goos story! I love okita! *glomps souji* |
| Midori Ryuu 2006-07-23 ch 2, | abuseI really love this. The way you portray Okita feels so real... I imagine the real him would have felt the same way... I'm looking forward to reading more of this. |
| little miss me 2006-04-24 ch 2, anon. | abuseYou're a talented writer, keep it up! ^_^ |
| sakurachan101 2006-04-07 ch 2, anon. | abusethis is a great story! i do hope u update! okita4eva! |
| charmed-sword 2006-02-17 ch 2, | abuseWhat a great story so far. I'm blown away by the depth of your writing, the descriptions, the language, the emotions...everything is so effecting. Souji's hopefulness that the Shinsengumi will be victorious is really sad. But this isn't depressing! It just shows how passionate he is, that he still holds onto life. Can't wait till you update! |
| anaemicfaeries 2006-02-17 ch 2, | abuseWow. What a simply stunning chapter. Loved how the narration was in little Soujiro's voice, and then slowly, the story came back to Okita, sitting there in the hospital, writing. That part, where Soujiro found his mother dead, that was so sad, our eyes got teary. It's *so* sad how Okita still thinks they'll come to tell him of victory...you simply must update soon, this is so good! |
| anaemicfaeries 2006-02-17 ch 1, | abuseWow. What a wonderful beginning! So beautifully written, so poignantly narrated, and though he is dying, it's not depressing at all. Particularly like how Okita chooses not to let himself go to the illness, the part where he was wiggling his 'bony toes' was just too cute! ^_^ It was sad too, how he was thinking of Kondo and Hijikata coming to tell him that the Shinsengumi have won. Kondo is dead by this point, isn't he? Great, passionate, defiant ending. That's Okita's swordsman spirit alright. Can't wait to read more! |
| Matilda Baggins 2005-10-17 ch 2, anon. | abuse*wave* I've been trawling the net for good Peacemaker fic, which is sadly hard to find, but I have to say that I liked what you started here. I'm so sad for Okita-san, though. *sniffle* You left him motherless. Okita-san needs a hug. He also needs Hijikata-san, but that's much later. Anyway, I hope you decide to continue this. It's sad and reflective and I really think it demonstrates all of Okita's insecurities and dichotomies and his love of laughter. |
| Aurorawhisperwind 2005-09-07 ch 2, | abuseI cried. That's all |
| double kodachi 2005-08-08 ch 2, | abuseThat was soo...touching! T.T You will update this soon won't you? Please? |
| Lady Yukimi 2005-07-24 ch 2, | abusethis seems like an awfully tragic story... but then again...this is the story of Soji okita. Anyway, please update soon. |
| Lady Kagewaki 2005-07-13 ch 2, | abuseThe imagery in this fic takes my breath away. Souji's sensitivity to the sorrows of life are insightful and beautifully written. |