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Woah! AWESOMENESS! That story was amazing. Perfect grammar, no spelling or capitalization mistakes, it's perfect. I'm favorting.

Another incredible drabble.

Thought-prevoking and chilling. I honestly think my heart skipped a beat at the last line. Ah, chilling, I am so happy with myself for finding a word that describes this well.

Chilling.

Wow...rings true in even the simplest of minds

absolutely awesome! i can read it again and again and not get sick of it, really good

This is genius.

I was going to ask you is this a begining, but it's cool.

Greetings Lael Adair, Very nice indeed! I especially like the bit of undeniable truth at the end. -Ashsema

sweet.

THis is a really cool poem-thingie.

I like the bit about chaos.

Really deep. Thumbs up. write more of these.

Nice! Really!