That is so sweet! It's enjoyable to read! One thing I would like to point out is that in Baten Kaitos: Origins, you meet Lyude's father and his name is Lyuvann. Other than that it was great.

Aw, your fics are making me like Lyude more and more, Willowren. What a cutie. And how sad, poor Almarde. Very nice. Short and sweet. _

Aw... so cute! Really, really nice.

xD Aww… young Lyude is so cute!

This story made me smile. You did the characters very well, and I had always wondered if Almarde was his real mother…

I hate Skeed and Vallye(Oh dear, I think I might have forgotten how to spell her name…); they're so cruel to Lyude and Almarde, but maybe that's because they know… ah well, I still don't like them.

Anyways, great fic, 'tis going to my favs.

Miaega

Aww! That was so sweet. I almost cried when Almarde and Jareth were talking alone together.

You really are a wonderful writer. Everyone is always in character and the storyline always tugs at my heartstrings.

Aw! That was sweet. You did a nice job.

Ohh, it's a very cute one-shot! lol, good job!

Cute! I love stories about little Lyude! They're just so kawaii! You did a nice job!

Aw, that's so cute! Great job!