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| ayame sumiyama 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abusereally i luv it! |
| Chromde 2008-05-08 ch 2, | abuseThis was pretty awesome. So cute, but also really . . . moving . . . with the whole family issues. And Neji and Hinata are adorable. |
| mkt 2008-04-02 ch 2, | abusenice update soon |
| anko2468 2008-03-22 ch 2, | abuseanko:...wait, doesnt dat mean dat they SLEPT 2gether? sinslayer:EWW, ANKO!!NOW DATS JUST RONG!!GROSS!!UGH, I TINK IM GONNA B SICK! anko:wat, im just sayin... sinslayer:I DONT EVEN WANNA HEAR IT! anko:wat da frick?! |
| anko2468 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuseanko:poor hinata.i-i j-j-j-just w-want -t-t-t-t-t-t-to cry.T~T sinslayer:cut the crap, cookie, dont type~ 2 late. cookie:squeak squeak squeak! anko:this is da problem wif having a hamster type what u say. |
| Ayanami116 2007-12-15 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting! It was just such an obvious fact and I never thought of this point of view. :-) I love child Neji and child Hinata. Haha. |
| InfestedByPurple 2007-11-22 ch 2, | abusewow this is really cute and really good. you should definetly continue this if you are thinking of doing that. and this is an AU setting,right? ~USD~ |
| Liber Fatum 2007-10-02 ch 2, | abuseNice...Pls update soon. One more thing, I guess since Hiashi is gone, Hanabi does not exist? |
| Jax9 2007-08-16 ch 2, | abuseKeep writing! |
| CandyGirl999 2007-07-17 ch 2, | abusePoor Hinata, things never get better for her. Don't worry baby, your brother cousin is there for you. |
| kirei hana35 2007-06-23 ch 2, | abusethats nice, I like it alot. are you going to have another chapter. |
| Blue-shine-angel 2007-04-01 ch 2, | abusePLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE UPDATE UPDTE UPDATE SOON SOON SOON SOON I REALLY WANT TO KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT IT IS SO CUTE TO! |
| aelita 2007-04-01 ch 1, anon. | abusefor the other reviewers,Hanabi is five years younger than Hinata.And here,Hinata has to be somewhere around the ages of 3 to 4.READ THE COMIC BOOKS PEOPLE! what a gret story.mahe a sequal. |
| LadyBardock 2007-03-31 ch 2, | abuseIt's a really good idea. And the way you write this story is really sweet and touching :) Please Please write more! And I hope that this story will go on till it's complete not like so many stories all around... Can't wait to read more :) |
| SweetMelancholy 2007-03-20 ch 2, | abuseIM DEFINITELY ADDING THIS STORY TO MY FAVOURITES. I LOVE your story. It is very well written. Very professional. It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. XD I like the way you describe Hizashi's opinion and feelings about the death of Hiashi and his guardianship over Hinata. And Neji's character is just so sweet! Like the way he watches over Hinata. It was really touching how Hinata was so attached to her father's things. I noticed Hanabi wasn't mentioned in this fic. Did you take her out? I like the way everything is going though. Hanabi missing isn't a problem. I see that some of the reviews you recieve comment about how they hope that this story doesnt involve incest. If your story really is HinataNeji(which i hope will be), please dont get discouraged. Let them have their opinions. As far as i know, im not the only one who adores HinataNeji. Its one of my favourite pairings. There is a growing number of HinataNeji fics out there and some of them are very well written and yours seems to be one of them! It would be good if you clarified on the pairings. Maybe you could put it into the summary. Keep up the good work and do update soon! SweetMelancholy |