really good story
keep this up and i might just have to fav. u as an author

Hahahahaha XD That was a wonderful fanfiction! I love your writing style. The descriptions and emotions were wonderful, and Riku's mother had me laughing so hard XD. I loved the part where she called Sora a "Sex Kitten". The ending was priceless X3

i love.

Hahaha aw! This was too adorable. :3
One thing I did love about the story is after Riku came back to Sora, Sora didn't instantly say Yay your back I love you! It sort of took them time to rebuild the relationship. I don't know it just made it seem a lot more realistic than most book/fanfics I read, So I thought I would comment on that.

Aw! So cute! Riku's mom is insane xD

It was so beautiful. The exposition was perfect so that I just got these beautiful images of the settings, so colorful and moody and textured and perfect. This was so well written, the pacing even, the dialogue sparring but meaningful. You just painted such lovely images in my brain, I love it.

First off I'd like to say that SoraxRiku is my FAVOURITE OF ALL TIME!! and that the pairing of the two makes my world spin.But this out of ALL the soriku stories i've ever read this is my favourite. The entire plot had me on edge. WOW . You shall forever have made my favourite Soriku story. I coud die.=P

OMG! I don't know how many times i re-read this, but if it hadn't been for this type of story, then you wouldn't be...my...FAVORITE AUTHOR! That's right. you heard me, you.are.my.favorite.author! *pant* *pant* Who...Whoo...Whoohoo. Yeah...Ciao!

Hee, Riku's mom and Sora are so cute. Very nice work with this!

~fd97

This is so... Cute! I love it to bits~ especially the ending. Oh, gawh, now I'm crying! Ah well. I suppose it can't be helped. I really like all your stories, by the way (as if you couldn't tell by all the 'Favorited' spamming you inbox).
...If I were to... 'aquire' the patented rights to Square Enix and... 'accidentally' mail it to you, would you make a video game like this? Just for me? 'Cuz I'm your most favorite-ist reviewer? (This is all hypothetical, of course... unfortunately... *sigh* It be :the: BEST video game out there...)
Anywhozils! I have a bicycle pump and shall proceed to inflate you ego while adoring you with lavish Kingdom Hearts related gifts and... home-made cookie dough? Write more, astounding author! Or I shall surely perish from lack of Riku/Sora (or is it Sora/Riku?) *gigglesnort* *dies*

Gosh I love this story! It's one of the best one-shots ever! I didn't have an account the first time I read it, so i'm reviewing now after rereading it. Its just that good.

I really enjoyed this story. Love the way you portrayed the characters with each other and away from each other.

Very enjoyable.

LOVE IT

OMG!!
Tis is like the BEST story EVER!
It is so cute!
;D

*squeals* I had this bookmarked for awhile. But I kept getting distracted. I'm glad I finally got through it! It was beautiful. I'm overcome with happiness for Sora, most of all. He's so great - being able to overcome so much, and still remain upbeat.