*sniff* so good...

Love the part about puppet strings.

:)

An immersive story, because everything here is entirely true. Sometimes it seems that Inuyasha can't do anything on his own, that he uses the presence of friends an enemies to define himself. You explain that beautifully, and bring a measure of dark uncertainity to the story as well.

I adore the title. Very well written, and bittersweet.

A beautifully touching story. _ I liked Inuyasha boeying to both women, to make them both happy and I liked how Kikyou and Kagome both influenced him although it's a bit OOC of Inuyasha to be 'controlled' like that.

And I especially liked the, "Would his body silence the screams of a dead woman and trade them for his own selfish pleasure?" I suppose Inuyasha thought not... a very beautiful one-shot, again! _

I'm snappin' my fingers 'cause it's just deep man. (Adjust sun glasses as she sips her mochaccino). Good job! Keep it up!

I'm snappin' my fingers 'cause it's just deep man. (Adjust sun glasses as she sips her mochaccino). Good job! Keep it up!