Reviews for A Sibling's Love

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dazzeling diamond 2006-12-19 ch 34,	abuseAW Claps loudly for JaFaCRaZy! Lovely story, lovely ending! I loved Karina, she was such a lovely character (i've got to stop saying lovely!) I'm gonna miss her, she was smart and cool, as well as very sweet. "She winked at him slyly, and they both laughed, slowly finding themselves enjoying each other’s company more and more…" That was a great description, so deliciously subtle, but temtpingly revealing, VERY well done, on that. I really liked that, how you wrote it. NAturally, all the words about al to jas or vice versa, were so true and u just captures them expertly. This story was great, and I can't wait to read more from you in the future!
persian85033 2006-12-19 ch 34,	abuseI think it ended perfectly. Especially with the last few paragraphs.lolHe was right in wondering if the gifts were kept safe with Iago watching over them. And Genie turning to a dj.lolQuite an exciting wedding. Or like he did in the movie, turning into the girls who wanted to catch the bouquet. Hmm, did Rasoul still catch it, btw? Great job!
persian85033 2006-12-18 ch 33,	abuseJust like Al to be completely against it, especially when his sister's so sad.lolWell, he was brave, and hopefully Aladdin will see it. That was hilarious that he said two weeks, though.lolBut these guys have known each other for much longer than Al and Jas did.
dazzeling diamond 2006-12-14 ch 33,	abuseWow, what a long (also great) chapter! I LOVED the whole angry-Aladdin thing, so in character and totally protective of his sister, just adorable! I was a bit surprsied they decided to go ahead and think of marriage immediately, but if it's love, nothing should stop them! I'm very curious to find out what happens with Babkak and Princess Jenea...should be good, I'm sure you've got something up your sleeve! I don't have any story ideas for you as of yet, as I'm still juggling my own...but I think of one I'll let you know. So sad that this near the end sob sob but I know it will be coming a to a successful close.
persian85033 2006-11-26 ch 32,	abuseActually, I think it's about time for Karina to realize who really cares about her. Things seem to have gone by just perfectly in this chapter, especially with everyone believing Iago, and Kassim finally telling Karina. About time! He's obviously much better than Faral. He'd better just hope that Al doesn't find him again, cause I don't think Faral will live to tell the tale.lolEspecially with Genie on Al's side. Apart from cheating on Karina, putting Iago in a bad light in front of everyone.
StoryWriter92 2006-11-26 ch 32,	abuseWOW...I have to say...in all honesty...that's the best chapter you've written so far. It felt so wonderful to see Kassim finally admitting his feelings--and I like the way he did. Gradually,nervously...and lucky for him,it paid off. I definitely did not feel he was taking advantage of her at a weak moment or anything like that. It was the right time and place for him to say it,and it was a beautiful scene. The dialouge was so beleiveable and romantic,withought being sappy. In a word--it was brilliant. PLEASE update soon!
dazzeling diamond 2006-11-25 ch 32, anon.	abuseHey! Sorry for reviewing late, I only just got the alerts which I'd been missing! Ok, In response to your worries, I don't things are moving too fast at all. Yes, it IS fast, but not in a way that it doesn't make sense in the story, u know? In a siutation like this it sort of has to unfold this way! But hey, I'm not very good with time, I think my story is movin too slow, but that's besides the point! lol I don't see it as taking advantage of her, well, in some ways he is...but he's a good guy, with good intentions, so even if he's jumpin in a bit quick, she'll learn how crazy he really is for her. That last scene was beautiful, and I loved the way he described his jealousy, with the whole "walking down street kohl eyes" thing. Plus the kiss, cétait tres mignon! That's French for, It was very cute! Update!
dIStUrBEd AvOCadO 2006-10-19 ch 2,	abuseWow. Just . . . wow! What a pwnful story. Everyone is in character and everything! Intresting choice to chose Aladdin's sister to return. nodds I will have to read on and see how you play out Jafar, if he's even in this fic . . . crosses fingers Well anyways, I have to go review on other stories now! Bye! :) -Haillie the Genie PS: Even though I haven't read all the chappies yet can I still tell you to update? lolz
dazzeling diamond 2006-10-12 ch 31, anon.	abuseAw, I really feel for Karina! I totally get where's she's coming from, a bit of denial and well a whole lot of doubt about a lot of things. I think whatever you did this chapter was fine, with the dialogue and all. It was believable and Iago was very in character. Well done! I can't wait for the next chapter!
persian85033 2006-10-11 ch 31,	abuseI'm glad Genie believes Iago. Everyone is just making me so mad right now, making Iago feel bad! Even Aladdin! And especially Karina! I know Iago's kind of tricky, but, like, accusing him of carrying on Jafar's plans more? Gr. Stupid girl! I hope she remembers he tried to warn her when she finds out the truth!
dazzeling diamond 2006-09-24 ch 30,	abuseOh GOD! What is he gonna do?! I really tink you've done an excellent job in constructing Faral's character, he's so calulating yet intriguing at the same time. I like the way you situated Iago and faral's meeting. In a sense, that is how I see both characters behave in such a scenario. I really feel for Iago! Being blackmailed! What a horrible feeling! Nevertheless, i think you wrote it cleverly! Now I can't help but feel bad for Karina :( UPDATE:)!
persian85033 2006-09-24 ch 30,	abuseFaral better not hurt Iago!I'll hate him, no wait, I already do, so...well, I'll hate him even more. Exactly why should he care if Kassim likes Karina? He's just evil, that's the thing. Update soon. He can't stop Kassim! He's the one Al should help get his sister!
persian85033 2006-06-28 ch 29,	abuseThey can't believe him!They have to believe Iago!Now he's gonna turn everybody against Iago? He better not!
dazzeling diamond 2006-06-27 ch 29,	abuseAl had better not believe him! even if the others do. Poor iago, always getting blamed even when he's telling the truth about faral and his "Life long friends" UPDATE!
dazzeling diamond 2006-06-20 ch 28,	abuseOMG! hey, sorry i didn't review earlier, i accidentally deleted the alert and then forgot it was updated! I like Al's protectiveness, i have always seen as that type, protective on his friends family and especially his gf. I see it more so with the females though, the whole defensiveness. It makes sense that he would feel rage and all, so nice characterizing there! OMG, poor Karina...but this will be interesting!

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