OH snap!! :P

I'm thinking the emperor is still alive and that he faked his own death when he realised the jiang shen-li was after him (if he is, indeed, the bad guy here) lol jsut a hunch. Love yuor stories they're super awesome!! I was looking for a retelling of the first movie in writing exactly like you did lol I'm also looking for somethign that's like the first movie except that when she gets wounded shang would react differently or seomthing. Like maybe they go over the edge and end up alone in a cave and have to find their way back or soemthing. But I haven't yet lol If you see anything like that could you PM me please?? thanks a bunch!!

I told you I love all your Mulan works and I am glad to say I was not disappointed with this one..

Loved em' all! ~Brittany~

Lovely story!

Will there ever be another continuation in this series?

Your stories were really good. You should make a fourth one though. If you aren't going to, would you be insulted if I wrote one and gave you credit?

I love your Mulan stories. Maybe you could do a sequel to this one. With Chen and his new training, probably Mulan expecting a baby and the challenges of pregnacy between married couples. You know, Mulan doesn't like being helpless and now she's harboring two lives. Maybe you could consider the idea.

I love it. Great ending to a great story! I hope there's a sequel to this one. If you decide to make another sequel to this, can Mulan be with child? Great twists, a good amount of suspense, the grammer & spelling was correct and checked thoroughly. Please continue with your stories.

Great ending!! It was a nice wrap up, I throughly enjoyed it!

you should describe your characters and the places that they are in even if you think people already know what they look like. it would make for a more visual story. Also it's like the characters are repeating themselves. they don't have to do that. just offering some helpful critisim. but the story is intriging non the lest. can't wait to read more of it.

Beautiful, simply beautiful. I loved it, great story it would be cool if you had a whole series like this but you don't have to. You have definatly earned a place on my favorite author list. Good job I look forward to reading more!

Cool chapters, I enjoyed very well. You were right the Courtyards and Waterside Marriots are definately better than the regular ones.Anyway, update soon the story is going well.

And the surprises keep coming!! Keep up the great writing!! Can't wait for the next chapter!

What will happen next? Is Mulan right? Please post more as soon as possible.