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darkie 2007-09-27 ch 2, anon.	abuseim confused, what excatly did the Halliwell family do to Chris? You keep saying that he was neglected and mistreated by them,what excatly did they do? chapter1 had Chris openning a portal, is he going to the future or what and is he (chris) so messed up that he cant differente his past family and his future ones? Are you going by Charmed standard on time travel? you know,chris has memories of what happen to him while he was in year 05/06? if Chris is invisable how did Wyatt recognise him? im not tearing the story down i just have questions. thanks
NaruXHinata-Rules 2007-08-19 ch 13,	abusewow this was really good! Keep writing please!
Werid-O-Ville 2007-07-19 ch 13,	abuseOMG! thats was so good,really,really good has to be one of my favorites :)
Marcus1233 2007-05-31 ch 13,	abuseaww, the ending's a bit anti-climatic. Continue on whining) But, for what it's worth I had a good time reading the previous ones.
Marcus1233 2007-05-31 ch 11,	abuseThis is just getting better and better. Ah, conflict. The feeling of surrounded by other's confusion...their chaotic feelings in a turbulent...pandemonium ruling the air. It's exhilarating.
Marcus1233 2007-05-31 ch 8,	abuseSorry. Actually I'm not sorry. I don't feel the pang of sadness here..they deserve tons more of horrific tortures. I feel outrage that a kid is ignored like that..it's as if he doesn't even exist. Wait, about the time traveling bit..he came to the past and do the torture thing...won't the future version have that memory instilled in them since it had jhappened in their past already?
Marcus1233 2007-05-31 ch 7,	abuseOh Lord. This story is going into my favourite list. (giggles) So far I've read stories of Chris turning evil and so forth but all they are are due to spells or potions or whatnots. But this...On his own true will and sadistic side. This is bloody amazing. Such sadistic nature. Oh, the malice. I could just drown in them. (shrugs) I've been accused of rooting the dark side once in awhile...especially if the bad guys are cool... And the bast actor award goes to...Chris Haliwell for his demented performance of an abused child.
Marcus1233 2007-05-31 ch 6,	abuseHe fainted? Huh...must be because too much premonitions and the psychic impacts. They're all misguided with what they see as the truth. Poor people.
Marcus1233 2007-05-31 ch 4,	abuseHey, cliff hangers should be continued with the exact scene..not something else... Tsk. You a the biggest tease in this entire fandom...! (grins) Hey, I made a compliment sound like an insult.
neb92 2007-02-23 ch 13,	abuseThat was sick and twisted. I like the angst, but killing Chris was over the top. seriously.
just another nobody 2006-07-30 ch 13, anon.	abuseWow. Cool story. You really like killing people don't you? Whatever, your stories are awesome even if they make me cry sometimes.
Blue Eyed Dragon Girl 2006-05-31 ch 13,	abuseWoah! That was crazy! Chris going nuts and homicidal! Yo! Holy moly! I was kind of hoping Wyatt would be able to talk him down from it but apparently not! too bad! Great job though! Loved all those flash back scenes and the diary entries. They were really well written! Great job!
goldstranger 2006-05-24 ch 13,	abuseIts amazing how much I've gotten sucked into your writting. The style the charecter's the situations are amazing. Its heartbreaking how one continuous decision can change a person. I had wet eyes in the end, I couldn't believe how alone he felt that he had to go back and make his parents suffer like that. Very cool.
Long-Live-Christopher 2006-02-25 ch 13,	abuseNikki, how COULD you!?!?! Oh my f-in god! What a fantastic chapter, but og my GOD! how on earth could you do that to Chris?!?! I stick with this story for months, fel Chris's pain, feel so sorry for him, and you kill him off? Um...just for the record, I ain't really mad! just really, REALLY shocked! I di NOT see that coming! Wow! It was just such a shock!
shyeye 2006-02-22 ch 13,	abusethat was good

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