The mood set at the beginning and the mood towards the end I felt seemed to have shifted subtley, but the pieces still seemed to fit together nicely. The beginning, in particular I liked, just because of the silent and very still mood set. The style of writting flows well for the most part, as well. A very interesting piece overall. Well done.

... err... I want to read MORE. I LOVE IT! *jumps around the room* plz continue... *you wanna have a coockie?*

whoa... In my years of listening to my fathers' twisted controversial stories of religion (We're Catholic, ironic, no?) this story has to be way more interesting. Great job! Cheers!

0.o disturbing... me likee! Thank you for being such a faithful reviewer... and if there is a sequel to Cloudy Night, it won't be out for a while because i have two more active fics that i haven't up dated in two weeks cuz i was doing a project at the last moment...
love this story! and as for the name at the bottom of this review, it's my nickname...\

Plum-chan

*stares* Whoa... That was... unbelievable. So creepy! I like how you summarized Krad's attitude with: "I have sinned... and it feels wonderful." So creepy...

...ack.

Kylara: THATS ALL YOU HAVE TO SAY? IS ACK!? WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU!?! SAY SOMETHING! ANYTHING! DON'T BE STUPID! -beat-

-eyes water- Owie... -cry-

K: ...why do I bother. Nice story Nef. Not bad at all. Can't wait for the sequel. +.+ you know ill be waiting for it

very good...I enjoyed that verymuch