Oh I love this. Beautiful. Caring, gentle El is just so sweet, and it's lovely to see vulnerable Sands.

This was really good, and by the end I had to say Aw...loved how you portrayed them as more then just hardened fighters.

Good work in showing Sands's POV through his other senses, which is a real challenge. The dynamic between your Sands and El is nicely done. I especially liked, "Because you have been punished enough." That's a very good example of El-logic! Hope to see more from you.

Oh. Gentle and caring El does things to me which are so good. Thank you! And I am so wishing you would perhaps do some more in this AU? Pretty please? Because you have such a way of painting pictures... And now I am dreaming of my own El whose 'fingers' would be 'kissing' me 'good night'...

This was so great! I like your version of Sands.

Some fav parts:

"He was just beginning to like the Mariachi’s company, which differed from the ‘relying on El to take care of every aspect of his life’ relationship they started with."

You explain that wonderfully. I also like

"Regaining his equilibrium, Sands shook off the comforting warmth of the Mariachi’s arms,desperately wished he hadn’t..."

Maybe I'm a bit romantic LOL

I'm putting your story on my "fav stories" Hope it's all right.

Take care /lillavicke vire

Hi! Thanks a lot for writing this. I just loved it. Sylvia