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| loathlylady 2008-06-27 ch 1, | abuseHilarious and spot on! |
| Zaedah 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuseJust brilliant! The pacing, the wit and finally... the attack of the Seamstresses. Had me in stitches from start to finish. All the details were there, and the use of secondary characters were perfect. Beyond lovely... achoo! |
| Jen 2007-05-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a really great story. I really enjoyed it. I laughed out loud when Angua attacked the seamstresses. Thanks! |
| me! 2005-10-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow. This is the first Discworld fanfic I've come across that I liked (sorry, other writers!)! Everyone was quite in character, and the plot was believable and well-executed. Huzzah! My only problems with the story are a few silly spelling mistakes. For example, right near the top of the story, Angua has a "tireS and slightly concerned gaze" (or maybe she's a bicycle!). Also near the top: "'You're eyes are bloodshot,'" instead of "your eyes." Please write more! |
| infiniteviking 2005-09-21 ch 1, anon. | abuse'Can you heal someone with your touch?' LOL! Good story and all. I especially like your dialogue. |
| Airelle Vilka, not signed i... 2005-06-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat is awesome. I'm glad to see Dr. Lawn in a fanfic-- we know so little about him, and he's great! Poor Carrot, he really needs a vacation... |
| ghostsinthemachine 2005-06-21 ch 1, | abuseI like this. It's always funny to see PTerry's most unflappable characters suddenly act like normal human beings. And I'd have loved to see the scene where Carrot mistakes Vimes for a duck. Just one question: why didn't I think of this?! |
| SARAH JAYNE 2005-06-17 ch 1, anon. | abusei loved it abselutly brilient. very funny keep righting |
| Sir Gawain of Camelot 2005-06-07 ch 1, | abusehee! there's a flu going around the Watch! at least it didn't get into the seamstress guild. ^-^ this was so cute! |
| Artemis-chan of Redwing 2005-05-28 ch 1, | abuseWaii!! That was just great. ^_^ I just finished rereading Night Watch, so I adored Dr. Lawn there. And I only caught one typo, if it makes you feel any better. Artemis-chan |
| Frosteh 2005-05-24 ch 1, | abuseThis has just given me an evil idea for Foreshadowing... ::nasty smile:: Thanks, Jess. I was thinking I needed some more padding. Muhahaha. Incidentally, your mind is still fairly disturbed, by the looks of things. I approve completely. I'm working on my next update, but where's yours, hmm? |
| Blank Ned 2005-05-24 ch 1, anon. | abuse*falls of chair* Why didn't I think of this? Anyway, brilliant. Just don't abandon 'Locks And Doors'! No, I'm not getting off the floor - I'm feigning death to get out of English Language... |
| Ozodrac 2005-05-24 ch 1, | abuseHuzzah! A new story! And a very good one too. Especially appropriate as most people at my school at the moment seem to be having that problem. A very good peice of writing but... It's not going to interfere with Locks and Doors, is it? |
| Berenike 2005-05-23 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant story! |