I really like the style you used here..the alternation of the vicious fight and the detached, after-the-fact report of their whole situation.
Another fantastic portrayal on how their final battle might turn out..here's hoping Kishimoto isn't thinking along equally depressing lines!

damn you and your angst and you sasunaru-y goodness! DAMN YOU!

I know how important reviews are to writers being a writer.

I'm no good at writing reviews but I remember looking at my stats and seeing people adding me to their fav and alert list but no even reviewing. I was pretty **

Yep that's right. I'm adding you to my favorite list. I don't particularly enjoy the pairing SasuNaru, I prefer NaruSasu, but format in which yours was written just caught my attention.

Great story.

That's an amazing story! Very sweet at the end and good writing through the whole thing. I enjoyed reading it.

That was good.

And they're not talking. I'm sorry; tasteless joke there

heh, when I read this a second time 9I ONLY read a fanfiction over if I really like it!) I couldn't help but laugh at that 'joke'. XP

Nicely done.

*Cries* That was so sweet and sad...

;__; Awwuh. That's sad. (Duh. XD Stupid basser)

Seriously, though. HONTOUNI SUGOI~! One of the bette rone shots I've read. ^_^

you ARE aware there is actually an equals sign button on the keyboard? lol, =

i liked this, well done *thumbs up*

Oh... It did just what a death fic's supposed to do... I hate death fics because I like happy endings, but it was a perfect narusasu death fic... I can't say anything bad, I almost loved it!

I love the ending...even if tehy died...*sob*

W o w

You should so submit this to some LJ community

You'd get much more reviews than here

wah I cried during this :( it was so sad and cute awesome one shot

Great fic, perfectly captures their angst, their screwed-up love/hate relationship. I love the quotes interspersed with the action.

Look forward to more (=

Not bad, pretty good for a first time. :)