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| Kozga Nitt 2007-05-16 ch 1,  | abuseVery good. I don't often see Gaara being seme-like in fanfics, but you did well on this. The only thing that confused me was that you didn't ephasize who's siblings were on the beach, who was speaking, and who what doing what at times. But other than that, I like it! |
| Shinigami 2006-10-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseI want to know exactly HOW Naruto dragged the other shinobi to the beach! I doubt the girls would mind the beach, Neji wouldn't be able to say 'no' to Naruto and Hinata. Lee, Choji and Kiba wouldn't mind a day off at the beach. Shino, Gaara, Shikamaru, Kankuro and Sasuke would take some convincing... *LOL* Aww! A blushing Lee! How adorable! *grins* A sunburnt blushing Neji, I need a picture badly! *cracking up* Naruto, exactly HOW did you convince Sasuke to help you make a sand-castle? And when will you 2 'fess up to each other? If Gaara and Lee can get together, SO can you 2! |
| Soxp 2006-07-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou have a account?! DX Why am I just finding out about this now? I love this fic. It's so wonderful. ._. |
| Raven Cactuar 2006-07-26 ch 1, | abuseWow, very nice. Go Gaara! LOL! |
| TunaxPenguin 2006-07-13 ch 1, | abuseThat was awesome!! ^_^ |
| angelde1 2006-07-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseYAY!*FAN GRL SQEUAL* GO GAARA! and go u cause this story rox! |
| geka0taitsume0taikaiyou 2006-06-28 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sweet and the setting is so romantic. |
| Gentle Kit 2006-03-25 ch 1, | abuseAww that was cute. :3 |
| Setg'-in 2006-01-30 ch 1, | abusehehehe...oh yha...catcalls all around for gaara to to make a move!, well see yha |
| K-bo 2006-01-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow! Very well written, extremely cute! Gaara licking ice cream off of Lee's fingers ^__^ *giggles* cuteness! Gaara and Lee are cute together, they are the best pairing. Ta! |
| Shiny Object Zero-1 2006-01-16 ch 1, | abuseNYAO! Dharma-chan!! It's me, ShinyObject01! Anyways, know I've said it before, but...love this story! It's so...so...so...CUTE! *Applauds* |
| Hepzheba 2006-01-15 ch 1, | abuseSo cute. Left me with a huge smile that I just can't get off my face. The boys are gorgeous! |
| Aifos 2006-01-12 ch 1, | abuseReally nice. I liked it. |
| Flame-Kunoichi 2005-12-21 ch 1, | abuseaww! its cute, and i LOVE how you did naruto. just keeping sasuke THERE the whole time. and then his yell after gaara kissed lee. *giggle* and the ice cream! that really reminds me of another fic, but i dont remember which... augh... this was very well written tho! |
| Slover Pink 2005-12-08 ch 1, | abuseI loved it, great story, please write another one...but longer with lee/gaara. |