damn! i totally didnt expect that ending..i kinda always wondered what would happen if Genis left willingly tho, very insightful...you should make a sequeal to this. the ending is screaming for it

are you going to write more? i hope you do, i want to noe what happens next..

*Sniff* So sad...While I've read a few stories that told about a possibly Genis betrayl, this one was easily among the best. Espcecially how you eneded it with Genis still hating Lloyd before he died. Very dramaic...and very sad...Excellent story, Rose.

NO! GENIUS! I cried for 15 minutes after the ending...T_T

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I know Indignation and I remember when he told me the story. This is more detailed. I love this, it's very, very sad. This should've been an alternate battle in the game along with Zelos. This is great!

Wow I mean wow it actually made me cry when he said he hated Lloyd that was sad you have to write more.

...Genis died... o.o Awesome story, held my breath sometimes! :)

Man, that was sad. Sad, sad, sad. And it was depressing that Genis told Lloyd that he hated him as his final words. :(

Despite the intended gloominess, this was actually really good. I liked how Genis could use spells that Mithos could use. I also like how, til the very end, Lloyd wanted his best friend to come back.

All in all, your fic was great!! Keep writing!!

Man, this is really good! Brought tears to my eyes...very touching, keep it up. Poor Genis, and he was one of my favorite character too...

Poor, poor Genis...

That...was sad...that almost made me cry when Genis said he hated Lloyd before he died...wow.

Ah! we need more fics that focus on this betrayal... it's a shame that the game didn't include such a awesome feature eh? well whatever, at leas this fic is here! It's been well done! Very good work!