You, getting into all my favorite anime/manga. I loved this too! Especially the way you have it in first person point of view, it really makes the story work well.

I like the lengh too, you take just enough time to get your point across and make it meaningful, not pointless. Great job!

That was so sweet! - Pity it was so short, but I liked it anyway. *grins*

That was really good. I hope to see more from you.

Well, since incest just isn't a good idea where evolution is concerned, and I just plain don't know what 'shounen-ai' means, I can't realy endorse the whole 'twincest' idea. However, your writing style is clean and polished and just superb, and I have to give your skill the praise it deserves. By portraying the twins' emotions so beautifully and clearly, you managed to take a risky premise and make it completely unoffensive. Lesser writers could not have done so. Write more fics - oh yes, please do.

Absolutely great fic. I love Knives x Vash and Knives Vash, and to see it written so well makes me happy. Very happy.

I especially love how they both have feelings for each other, yet both feel like they can't take that step to express them. _