it was a decent story but i agree with the other reviewers NWC was a little out of character...come on there deadites not invencable killing machines...if you f-ed them up enough they wouldnt beable to keep on fighting. also come on was a army of darkness fic with out hail to the king -asj williams- in it. but i did like it. also you must really hate Ukyo and shampoo because you usally kil them first in your fan fics

Very nice. Chacracters may be a little OOC, but who cares? It's the Evil Dead! I'm one of those who read your first version, and was disappointed by the fact that you hadn't written a sequel. But it's okay. Army of Darkness only works with one person going back. It wouldn't have worked. I was still hoping Ash would make a cameo. It's a shame he didn't. Keep writing. Happy trails.

Cute.

No use of martial arts anywhere really, it's not very convincing as a Ranma 1/2 story. I'm sure you could replace the character names and post it elsewhere without people noticing. I mean what's with this Ranma/Ranko business? No mention of curses anywhere! I'm wondering if you really did steal this off somewhere now.