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Equify
2009-11-07 . chapter 32
That story was unbelievable. I'm almost as stoic as Tom and I even felt some tears. What I truly appreciated about this was that you had the reader, namely me, feeling the same thing as the character. Fantastic! Have you ever thought of a sequel to this?
Great, no, Impeccable job!
-Hannah-
Ridikulus
2009-11-04 . chapter 32
Oh my goodness, loved the story but especially the alternate ending, much more so than your first ending bc I like all the strings to be neatly tied up. Anyways, great story, thank you for a wonderful read :)
Vinwin.
2009-11-01 . chapter 32
That was one of the best fics I have ever read. Period.


I'm falling in love with Tom/Hermione. :)
ClaireReno
2009-11-01 . chapter 1
May I like, marry this story?
'Cause I'm pretty sure we can find a country that will allow me to marry a story.
I'm in love with this story.
SERIOUSLY I AM TRULLY,MADLY,DEEPLY IN LOVE WITH YOUR STORY!
Marcus S. Lazarus
2009-10-29 . chapter 32
Hoo boy...
Nice bit of work, really.
If nothing else, you made a valid point at the beginning about the problems involved in stopping Voldemort’s ARMY even if Voldemort himself was defeated; if you can’t beat him with sheer weight of numbers, stopping him before he starts is the only logical option left.
Admittedly, the exact specifics of the time-travel spell involved were a LITTLE complicated- why not just have something which sends them all back at once and leave it at that?-, and I would have thought they’d take a BIT more time to ‘settle in’ to start calling each other assumed names even when they’re in PRIVATE, but that aside your plot ideas were rather interesting.
Your take on Tom Riddle was a particularly interesting read; I didn’t quite see how some aspects of his personality made sense at first- his apparent ‘dislike’ of purebloods when you’d have expected him to be ENVIOUS of them rather than resentful was a real question-mark-, but the ‘Anima Adflictatio’ curse made for a particularly interesting twist, to say nothing of your later ‘revelation’ that he WASN’T in charge of the Death Eaters...
The idea that Myrtle’s death was an accident is a BIT of a stretch- the circumstances under which he killed her definitely weren’t planned, but why did he even let the basilisk out in the first place if he wasn’t planning on killing anyone with it?-, and I’m still a BIT sceptical about the idea of Ginny and DRACO working together on anything (Although that’s mainly based on personal opinion; I just never entirely liked that guy on his OWN, never mind with any of the other characters), but Hermione’s race to save Tom proved highly moving.
(You could do with expanding on the last chapter, of course, but what you’ve done gets the main points across, anyway)
All in all, a VERY nice bit of work...
Hellequin01
2009-10-22 . chapter 32
I knew it! I think I had known since chapter 25 or 26. It was Draco the whole time! Except I thought he was really the bad guy. But anyway. I'm glad he wasn't 'cause I simply LOVE him in this fic.
I loved this very, very much. I read the whole thing in like 2 days. School and all.
Tom is just... wonderful.
Thank you SO much for writing this ^^
Someday I might translate this into Portuguese. If you'd let me, of course.
Forgive my grammar/spelling mistakes. My English is getting rusty.
michelada89
2009-10-15 . chapter 18
I want to say what an amazing writer you are and I hope that you go PRO! Hope to read more of your stories you are really talented!
Anastasya24
2009-10-15 . chapter 31
Amazing! I think i can't find other words to describe your fic right now than...wow!:P THANK YOU for sharing it! It was a real pleasure to read it :)
Sir Stud Muffin
2009-10-11 . chapter 31
I have to say... This is likely my fifth time reading Have You Ever. Hence why I have to review on chapter 31 and not 32, I've already reviewed 32. It gets me every time, though. This is and probably always will be the best fanfiction I've ever read - and one of the best stories. It's my favorite read and I mean that sincerely. I never grow tired of it.

Not only was this what got me interested in the pairing, but it also lead me to theories of time travel. Have You Ever inspired me to write my own story - which ended up becoming an addiction and now I've been writing all sorts of things like a fiend for the past year or so.
Thank you for that.
I've thanked you before, but I'm sure you don't know that. Who knows, maybe I'll be praising you again in another review some time... Eventually, I'll run out of chapters!

Big fan,
Cay
eszter
2009-10-04 . chapter 32
ah.it was really really fantastic.i love it, i love you, i love herm, i love tom and i love everybody and everything. PEACE and LOVE! dear lady moonglow you are amazing, you're gonna be legend..wait for it..Ary (i hope you know the series how i met your mother^^)
thank you for the beautiful story. love, eszter :)
hyoz
2009-10-02 . chapter 32
Hi! I LOVE YOUR FIC (L) with all my heart :)! PLEASEE! you let me traslate your fic to the spanish? ...So, you say? (I hope yes) :)
CullenCovenGirl88
2009-09-27 . chapter 32
Oh My Goodness! Holy **. Its over. AW! No it CANT be over... this is by far the single ,ost amazing fic I've ever read. It is well written, funny, sad, lovely, and all-together amazing. I cried, laughed, sob (damn you) and fell in love with a character I have despised since the beginning. I cant thank you enough for the addiction you have given me to this dark and mysterious character :D I owe you! Thanks for writing this.
Samantha
2009-09-26 . chapter 24
"...stubborn specks of blue dotted throughout the gray like fresh blueberries in an otherwise sordid muffin."


Best. Description. EVER.
Seriously.


In earlier chapters, Dumbledore was said to be the Transfiguration professor, correct? This chapter says he teaches Charms. A minor discrepancy, but a discrepancy nonetheless.
Storm Spirit
2009-09-25 . chapter 32
I know that this story is finished, and I have gathered that you are no longer on fanfiction (or at least not so often).
Nonetheless, I would like to thank you most sincerely for such a wonderfully crafted story. I am at a loss of what else to say, other than that this is certainly one of my favourite works on fanfiction.
All the best,
Storm Spirit
EnchantressPoison
2009-09-12 . chapter 15
Wow, one I have to say you are a brilliant writer. This is freaking me out! This is exactly like my book...Its crazy, except its in Harry Potter and all that jazz! I have to say that you describe and write the characters VERY well. Their personalities are exactly how I pictured them, especially Tom. He's my favorite :) This is the best fanfiction I've ever read. Keep up your writing, you are magnificent!
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