It's not passing but not failing either. Kinda like icecream. It's not so icy and not so creamy. Maybe you should add detail and tell about some characters life on the islands. To tell the truth, I was kinda dissapointed about this story.

STUPID!

Sounds okay but maybe you could describe it a littel better. Exiting detail and charcater information.

GREAT! OMG- and I thought I was a good author! It's GREAT! Dude, you should like, work for Avatar and write their stuff! The only thing I would've like better if it would be AangXkatara- but yours is SO cool! AND katara and zuko have a spark!SUPER!

tis cant b da hole ting.wheres te rest?!

I liked your beganing but the story was to short I want to know more!

I really like this idea. It would be good if the injection wore of earlyer than it was supposed to... hint, hint ;).

UPDATE OR I WILL DIE OF WAITING!

I like the begining, keep going! i want to see what happens and everythin!

really good please write more.

hey i loved the story can wait to read the net chpater

That was very good, very good...

However, the format you used in this chappie is banned.. It's usually refered to as "script" format or "chat" format... But, yeah, this story could be deleted for it.. And I don't want that to happen! So, just remove this chapter and rewrite it, is all.

Okie doke, good job, I look forward to more...

Ha,ha I like it!Very funny,and also well written.Great story!Keep writing!One word-pudding-complete randomness by me.

:) this is good

This rocks my socks! keep writing and I will keep looking to see what happens next!
Kira out!