That was, simply put, a wonderful RJ fic. I really enjoyed it, with all the drama and anguish thrown in it...it made it all the more appealing and wonderful :D I especially liked the last chapters and getting the chance to see the two of them together.

the only thing that would have been nice was for Billy to have had more appearances...but maybe it's for the best, along with Dean/Jess quarrel. (although i think everyone agrees that would have been very amusing...)

So, yeah, just wanted to congratulate you once more in accomplishing such a great fic! Awesome work you got here :)

that...was...simply...beautiful... I really enjoyed it, and it could totally have been true, and so like Jess. That was superb! :)

i am amased, this story is, wow, i dont even know wat to say!but i did sorta get confused at the ending, did rory and jess get married or what but still i did read it in one day, but i have many others, but still.

i say this a lot to many pple, but i mean it everytime i say it to anyone, you really do you know how to right a story that will keep me day dreaming for ages!

keep up the super work, and i think i will be, actually am, i BIG fan fo urs! :)

ok, i know you finished this story quite some time ago, but i've only just come across it now, and oh-my-god. i loved it so much! its seriously brilliant! the only faults i could find were a few typo related ones. nothing was wrong with the story whatsoever! i was almost in tears reading jess's not-diary. P

brilliant, amazing, perfect.

Thank You.

There are no other words to describe the effect this story has had on me.

Literai has always been my favorite pairing, and I could never understand exactly why. Until I read this...

It has transcended its intended Gilmore-esque universe, and ushered a realisation on a personal level.

Thank You.

Okay...I read this the whole evening and i can now truly say that I'm literary sated. it was so good. no great. no amazing. just a great love story and an awsome lit fiction. thank you!

i FINALLY read the rest of these chapters, and i loved it, and im sorry it took me so long! the alternate ending would have been a bit depressing, but good too. i really loved this story :D

bueatiful story.

luv the last two chapters of fluff to go with all the previous angst. a really engrossing tale.

oh and i luv the blooper reel at the end a few funny ideas

thanks again for a fan-fuking-tastic story

satblues

aww.. i loved this chapter. i'm so sad to see this story end, it's so wonderful. hope to read more of your work soon!

Oh this ending was perfect.

The gift exchange was so sweet and showed how in love they are.

And yes, I'm so glad you didn't go with the alternate version!

Mr. Sloane, huh? and Julia? Is there a secret ALIAS theme going on here, or is it just me? I love Literai! LOL...

Mariah

This is by far the best Jess and Rory story I have ever read. It is so them. You totally have their characters down. And most of the time when people try and change Jess they lose something in his original character, but you made him believable as a changed guy. I could still see old Jess in him. Most stories make him some giant puss after he goes and discovers himself, but you kept him real. I'm so glad I discovered this story!

U rock! Keep writing!

I really enjoyed this story and I'm sorry to see it over. You give the Lit heart what it needs.

I also think you went the right way. Good choice. :)

I really, really, really, REALLY LOVE this story! At first I hated it, because of the whole Jess saying he didn't love Rory, and stuff, but then I fell completely in love with it, and I'm really happy you didn't write it the other way you were thinking of. I would've like to see some "delicious verbal trashings by Jess" Towards Dean, but I Really liked the way it ended. I look forward to seeing more work of you!

Hey,

Amazing ending to an even better story. This was surely memorable and an interesting ride when it came to reading it.

Bye, smile :-)